自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn trả lời bằng cách lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì trả lời trực tiếp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (có/không + mô tả ngắn), sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic. Tránh lặp lại câu hỏi và giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because the streets were quiet, my parents felt comfortable letting me go out by myself.

建议: Bạn không trả lời câu hỏi mà lại hỏi ngược, và câu cũng không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trình bày quan điểm trực tiếp (Yes/No/It depends) rồi giải thích bằng 1–2 lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ. Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (for example, because, however). Giữ câu ngắn, tự nhiên và chính xác ngữ pháp.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient; for example, students often cycle to school to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were trying?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used an incorrect phrase 'when you were trying' which does not fit the context. The examiner asked about childhood possession, so the correct time expression is 'when you were a child'. Use appropriate time words to match the question context; replace 'trying' with 'a child' to form a meaningful clause.

× Did you change a popular?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's reply 'Did you change a popular?' is ungrammatical and does not answer the present-tense question. The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' so the student should respond in present tense about general opinion, e.g. 'Yes, bikes are popular' or 'No, bikes are not very popular'. Encourage using correct verb forms and sentence structure to state opinions in present simple.