自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and relevant to the question, start with a clear topic sentence, give a brief reason or detail linked to childhood, and avoid unrelated statements. Use correct grammar (e.g. "I didn't have one"). Keep the answer natural and within 2–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details (for example: "because" or "so").

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I preferred walking around my neighborhood because my family lived close to parks, so I often explored on foot with friends.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific, accurate details. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g. "cycling lanes" not "cycling rain") and avoid unclear phrases ("I saw three ice"). Use a linking word (e.g. "because" or "for example") and provide one or two concrete examples or comparisons. Keep it concise and coherent.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many cities have dedicated cycling lanes and affordable bike-sharing schemes. For example, I often see commuters using bikes on weekdays, and families renting bicycles in parks at weekends.

× No, I didn't have it, but I like working. That's why I usually walk around my house.

✓ No, I didn't have one, but I liked working. That's why I usually walked around my house.

Pronoun: 'it' is unclear for 'a bike' so replace with 'one' (incorrect use of pronouns). Tense consistency: the question asks about childhood (past), so 'didn't have' is correct but the following habits in childhood should be past too; change 'I like' to 'I liked' and 'I usually walk' to 'I usually walked' to maintain past tense. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent when referring to past time periods and use 'one' to refer back to 'a bike'. Note: If the student meant they still like working and usually walk now, keep present: 'No, I didn't have one, but I like working. That's why I usually walk around my house.'

× Yes, I think so because we have a lot of cycling rain and I saw three ice.

✓ Yes, I think so because we have a lot of cycling lanes and I saw three bikes.

Two word choice/preposition errors: 'cycling rain' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cycling lanes' (lanes are places for bikes). 'I saw three ice' uses the wrong noun: 'ice' is incorrect for bicycles; it should be 'bikes'. These are incorrect word choices rather than literal prepositions, but fall under incorrect use of prepositions/words in this list. Suggestion: use 'cycling lanes' for bike paths and 'bikes' for bicycles.

× I usually see some people riding bike.

✓ I usually see some people riding bikes.

Count noun agreement: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when referring to multiple people each riding a bike. Use plural form after 'people' to agree in number. Suggestion: match noun number to the subject — 'people' implies multiple bikes, so use 'bikes'.