自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is brief and contains a grammatical tense error. For a past-tense question, respond in past tense and give at least one supporting detail. Use a topic sentence then add a reason or short example. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, say whether you had one, why or why not, and a short consequence or memory.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or shared rides with friends, which made me quite active from a young age.

建议: Refusing to answer is not acceptable. Instead, answer directly and give a concise opinion with specific supporting detail. State your view, then add a reason or brief example using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Keep the response natural and within five sentences.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, urban areas have many bike lanes and bicycle-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient for commuting.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'don't have' is present tense and mismatches the time reference. Suggestion: use simple past 'didn't have' for habits or possessions in the past.

× Please ask me other questions.

✓ Could you please ask me another question?

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but is impolite or unnatural in this context; also 'other questions' plural conflicts with the immediate request. The examiner likely expects a brief answer, not refusal. For politeness and naturalness, use 'Could you please ask me another question?' or simply 'Please ask another question.' Suggestion: use modal 'could' for polite requests and 'another question' for a single follow-up.