自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhưng để đạt điểm cao hơn bạn nên: 1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp ngắn gọn; 2) Dùng liên từ để nối các ý (ví dụ: however, although, eventually); 3) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: nơi bạn tập, ai giúp bạn, cảm xúc khi học). Hạn chế trả lời quá rời rạc bằng cách giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my tenth birthday, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. At first I fell off several times, but with practice and my father's encouragement I eventually mastered balancing and riding confidently.

建议: Câu trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có so sánh hợp lý, nhưng bạn có thể nâng cao bằng cách: 1) Thêm dẫn chứng cụ thể (ví dụ: tỉ lệ, khoảng cách, hoặc ví dụ về thành phố/vùng); 2) Sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ quan hệ nguyên nhân-kết quả (for example, therefore); 3) Mở rộng bằng một dự đoán hoặc ý kiến cá nhân ngắn. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và không quá 4 câu.

示例: Yes, bikes are still quite common in my country, especially in rural areas where many students ride them to school. In contrast, people in large cities tend to choose motorbikes for speed and convenience, so cycling is less popular there. I think this trend will continue unless cities build more bike lanes and safer cycling infrastructure.

× My mother gave me a bike when I was 10.

✓ My mother gave me a bike when I was ten.

Use words for small numbers under 10-10 consistently in writing; 'ten' is preferred in formal writing though numerals are acceptable in transcripts. This is a style suggestion rather than grammatical error. Keep numbers spelled out for clarity.

× That was the first time I practiced riding a bike.

✓ That was the first time I had practiced riding a bike.

When describing an event that happened before another past event (the giving of the bike and then practising), use the past perfect to show the earlier action. Use 'had practiced' to indicate the practice occurred prior to 'that was' reference.

× I fell off my bike several times at first, but I made it in the end.

✓ I fell off my bike several times at first, but I managed it in the end.

'Made it' is informal and can be ambiguous; 'managed it' is clearer to express eventual success. The sentence is past tense, so keep verbs in past simple. This is a stylistic improvement to clarify meaning.

× I think bikes are quite common in my country, especially in rural areas, since I often see many students riding bikes to school.

✓ I think bikes are quite common in my country, especially in rural areas, since I often see many students riding their bikes to school.

Add the possessive pronoun 'their' to show ownership of the bikes by the students. This avoids ambiguity and follows normal English usage for plural possessors.

× However, in cities cycling is less popular because people prefer motorbikes.

✓ However, in cities cycling is less popular because people prefer motorbikes.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It uses present simple appropriately to state a general fact.