自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接但过于简短，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在开头用一句主题句回答问题，然后用一到两句补充具体原因或例子，使用连词使结构更自然。例如可以说明父母担心的具体原因、你是否因此有其他交通方式或是否后来改变看法。尽量控制在3-4句内，语言自然流畅。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought riding on the busy streets was too dangerous. For that reason they preferred I walk or take public transport to school. Only when I was a teenager did they allow me to ride in quiet parks under supervision.

建议: 回答内容相关但较简短，缺乏具体细节和连贯的扩展。建议先给出明确立场，然后用连词（such as, moreover, for example）提供具体原因、统计或对比（如城市与乡村的差异）以及个人观察或例子，丰富答案并保持自然表达。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Moreover, many people use them for exercise and commuting in crowded city centers where parking is difficult. For example, in my city bike-sharing schemes have become very common in the past few years.

× No, because my parents think it's too dangerous for me to ride outside.

✓ No, because my parents thought it was too dangerous for me to ride outside.

原句在时态上与提问的过去时（"Did you have"）不一致。考官问的是过去情况，学生应使用过去时描述当时父母的想法，因此把动词 think 改为过去式 thought，同时把形容词性从现在时的判断改为过去时的系动词 was。建议在回答过去经历或过去想法时，整体句子使用过去时以保持时态一致性。

× Yeah, of course it's convenient and cheap.

✓ Yes, of course they are convenient and cheap.

原句使用了单数主语与代词不一致的问题。前句询问的是关于“bikes”（复数），因此回答应以复数主语"they"和复数系动词"are"来表达。将口语的 "Yeah" 改为更正式的 "Yes"（非必须）更符合书面或正式答题风格。建议在回答关于复数名词时，注意代词和动词的数一致。

× You can even use it for sport.

✓ You can even use them for sport.

原句中代词"it"指代复数名词"bikes"，造成主谓和代词数不一致。应使用复数代词"them"来代替复数名词，并保持动词形式不变。建议复述或代指复数名词时使用相应的复数代词以确保一致性。