自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Sai phát âm và ngữ pháp nhiều; câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và lặp từ. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (ví dụ: “Yes, I had a bike.”), sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ hợp lý (because, so, but). Tránh lặp từ và dùng thì đúng (past simple). Ví dụ cụ thể: nói vì sao bạn không được phép, ai quản lý, bạn đã làm gì thay vì đi xe. Giữ dưới 5 câu.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I wasn’t allowed to ride it. My parents thought the roads were too dangerous, so they kept it in the garage. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus.

建议: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn và có ý; tuy nhiên có lỗi ngữ pháp (singular/plural agreement) và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi dùng liên từ để mở rộng (for example, because, however) và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh. Dùng từ vựng liên quan (commute, traffic, convenience). Giữ 2–4 câu tối đa.

示例: In my opinion, bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes and cars for commuting. For example, busy traffic and long distances make motorbikes more convenient, so few people use bicycles for daily travel.

× When I wear child I have I had a bike but I never but I never be a never be allowed to to to ride it.

✓ When I was a child I had a bike but I was never allowed to ride it.

The student used incorrect verb forms and tenses: 'wear child' should be 'was a child' (past tense of be), 'I have I had' is redundant and inconsistent, and 'be a never be allowed to to to ride' mixes infinitive forms incorrectly. Use simple past tense for past states and passive: 'was a child', 'had a bike', and 'was never allowed to ride it'. Also remove repeated words and extra 'to's. Suggestion: practice simple past statements and passive voice for permission (was allowed).

× In my opinion bike are not popular in my country because everyone use motorbike and car.

✓ In my opinion bikes are not popular in my country because everyone uses motorbikes and cars.

The subject-verb agreement and plural forms are incorrect: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally; 'are not popular' is fine but needs plural subject. 'Everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'uses'. Also the nouns 'motorbike' and 'car' should be plural when referring generally: 'motorbikes and cars'. Suggestion: match singular/plural consistently and remember that 'everyone' takes singular verbs.