自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency, reduce hesitations, and make the answer more structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms (e.g., "enjoyed riding a bike") and avoid filler sounds like "uh."

示例: Yes, I did. I enjoyed riding my bike with friends because it made me feel very free. Moreover, cycling gave me a chance to get fresh air and explore my neighborhood.

建议: Clarify your idea and organise it into a clear main point plus specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words (however, but, also) and correct nouns and verb forms (e.g., "not many", "bike lanes", "shared bikes").

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular. However, many cities lack enough bike lanes, which makes cycling less safe. On the other hand, shared-bike schemes have become common recently and are helping more people to cycle.

× I really enjoyed ride to ride a bike with friends.

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bike with friends.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing). 'Enjoyed ride' is incorrect; use 'enjoyed riding' to show the activity you liked. Suggestion: replace base verb with gerund after 'enjoy(ed)'.

× It feels like I'm very free and get some fresh air.

✓ It felt like I was very free and got some fresh air.

The question asks about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Feels' and 'I'm' are present tense; change to 'felt' and 'I was'. Also 'get' should be past 'got' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently when describing past experiences.

× Yes, I think so uh, although there's uh, there's not many not enough to ride a bike Rd. but we also have a sharing bikes, which is run learning.

✓ Yes, I think so. Although there are not enough bikes to ride, we also have bike-sharing services, which are becoming popular.

Multiple issues: 'there's' (there is) is singular but refers to plural 'bikes' so use 'there are' (Singular/plural issue ID 1 and subject-verb agreement ID 27). 'not many not enough' is redundant and ungrammatical; choose 'not enough'. 'Rd.' is unclear and incorrect. 'a sharing bikes' mixes singular and plural; use 'bike-sharing services'. 'which is run learning' is ungrammatical and likely intended to mean 'which are becoming popular' or 'which are being used widely'. Rephrase for clarity and correct agreement. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for plural nouns, avoid redundancy, and use clear noun phrases like 'bike-sharing services' with correct verb agreement.