自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly in past tense, be natural and concise, and avoid irrelevant phrases. Give a clear topic sentence and, if appropriate, one short supporting detail. Use linking words if adding details.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus.

建议: Give a clear opinion, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words for coherence. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, avoid hesitations, and make details specific (who, where, why).

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, in cities like X, cycling is common due to heavy traffic and affordable bike lanes, which makes commuting faster and cheaper.

× No, I don't have a bike, the man said.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, the man said.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; change to 'didn't have' for past. Also, if the student is reporting what the man said, 'the man said' is acceptable, but ensure tense consistency by using 'didn't have'. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' for past situations and keep reporting clause in past if needed.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country. Everyone looks bikes work faster traveling and it makes people, uh, get their if they get faster.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country. Everyone thinks bikes make traveling faster, and they help people get where they need to go more quickly.

This sentence has multiple issues: unclear structure, missing prepositions and conjunctions, and incorrect verb forms. 'Everyone looks bikes' is incorrect; likely intended 'Everyone thinks bikes' or 'believes bikes'. 'work faster traveling' is ungrammatical; use 'make traveling faster' or 'are faster for traveling'. 'it makes people, uh, get their if they get faster' is unclear—replace with 'help people get where they need to go more quickly'. Suggestions: break into two clear clauses, use 'think' or 'believe' for opinions, use 'make traveling faster' to express cause, and use explicit object phrases like 'get where they need to go'.