自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be careful with verb forms and keep answers concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct simple grammar errors (e.g., 'rode' -> 'ride' in this context, 'like' -> 'liked').

示例: Yes. My family owned several bikes when I was a child, and my siblings and I often rode them around our neighbourhood. For example, we would ride to the park every weekend, which helped us stay active and spend quality time together.

建议: Organize your answer with a clear opinion then one or two specific reasons. Use linking words for coherence (e.g., 'because', 'however', 'for example'). Avoid redundancy (e.g., 'because' repeated). Check word choice and small grammar points ('not as popular as it used to be').

示例: I think bikes are less popular now than before. This is because many people move to cities for work or study and rely on public transport like the skytrain and buses; for example, commuters find buses more convenient for long distances.

× Yes, my family had quite a lot of bikes when I was younger because my siblings and I would often go out in my neighborhood and rode these bikes together.

✓ Yes, my family had quite a lot of bikes when I was younger because my siblings and I would often go out in my neighborhood and ride these bikes together.

The sentence mixes past habitual 'would' with a simple past verb 'rode'; when using 'would' to describe habitual past actions, the main verb should be in base form (ride) after the auxiliary idea, or the sentence should use consistent simple past (we often rode). Use 'ride' to match the habitual past structure with 'would.' Suggestion: use 'would ride' or 'often rode' for consistency.

× It was one of the ways we like to spend time together as a family.

✓ It was one of the ways we liked to spend time together as a family.

The sentence describes a past situation ('It was one of the ways'), so the verb 'like' should be in the past form 'liked' to maintain tense consistency. Mixing past ('was') with present ('like') creates a tense mismatch. Suggestion: make verbs consistent in past tense when referring to past situations.

× I think it used to be, but it's not quite popular as it was anymore because a lot of people have been moving into the cities because of work or study and I believe most of the people use public transportation when they work in the cities, such as skytrain or bus.

✓ I think it used to be, but it's not as popular as it was anymore because many people have moved into the cities for work or study, and I believe most people use public transportation when they work in the cities, such as the skytrain or buses.

Multiple issues: 'not quite popular as it was anymore' is unidiomatic; correct form is 'not as popular as it was anymore' or better 'no longer as popular as it was.' 'A lot of people have been moving into the cities' is awkward with 'anymore' and the general statement—use simple past or present perfect depending on emphasis; here 'have moved' or 'have been moving' both possible but 'have moved' is clearer. 'Because of work or study' is acceptable but 'for work or study' is more natural. 'Most of the people' should be 'most people.' 'Skytrain or bus' needs articles and pluralization: 'the skytrain or buses.' Suggestions: keep tense consistent, use idiomatic comparative 'not as...as,' prefer 'many' instead of 'a lot of' in formal speech, and include articles/plurals for vehicles.