自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn: trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ rời rạc. Ví dụ: nêu rõ ai tặng xe, khi nào bạn dùng nó và mục đích (đi học). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, because).

示例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a small bicycle when I was in primary school, and I often used it to ride to school. For example, I would ride with my friends every morning because it was faster and fun.

建议: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng, chính xác về lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "humanitarian" sai; có thể muốn nói "hilly" hoặc "mountainous") và cấu trúc câu. Sử dụng linking words (however, because, for example) để tổ chức ý. Tránh tiếng ừ và từ thừa.

示例: Bicycles are less common because many areas are mountainous, so people prefer motorbikes or electric scooters. However, many people still ride bikes for exercise or leisure; for example, families often cycle in parks on weekends.

× Yes, I had one when I was at primary school, my mom. But for me to let me go to school myself.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was in primary school. My mom allowed me to go to school by myself.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear structure. 'At primary school' should be 'in primary school'. The phrase 'my mom' was attached incorrectly; split into a new sentence. 'But for me to let me go' is ungrammatical; use 'My mom allowed me to go' to show permission. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct preposition 'in' for school and a clear subject-verb phrase for 'allowed'. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× In my country there are many humanitarian and mountains, so motorbike or electric bike are more popular uh.

✓ In my country there are many highlands and mountains, so motorbikes or electric bikes are more popular.

The phrase 'humanitarian' is incorrect here; likely intended 'highlands' or 'rural areas'. 'Mountains' is fine. Use plural nouns 'motorbikes' and 'electric bikes'. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: choose appropriate noun ('highlands' or 'rural areas'), use plural forms and correct preposition structure 'In my country there are'. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× However, people usually use buy for many purposes such as entertainment or umm, exercising.

✓ However, people usually buy them for many purposes such as entertainment or exercising.

The original mixes 'use' and 'buy' incorrectly. Use the verb 'buy' with the object 'them' (referring to bikes). 'For many purposes' is fine. 'Exercising' is the correct -ing noun form here. Suggestion: choose one verb ('buy') and include the object; use gerund 'exercising' for activities and remove filler words. (Explanation in English as requested.)