自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp thì quá khứ và chia động từ, dùng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tự nhiên hơn, thêm liên kết hợp lý và chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: sửa "I practice" thành "I practised/ practiced"; thay "in my house" bằng "near my house" hoặc "in the park" nếu đúng; tránh từ thừa như "because it was the easiest way" nên nêu rõ lý do ngắn gọn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu và dùng liên từ như "so" hoặc "and" hợp lý.

示例: Yes. I had a bike from the age of six because my parents wanted me to ride to school. I practised every afternoon with my mother in the park, and after a few weeks I could ride confidently on my own.

建议: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và rõ ràng ý: dùng trình bày trực tiếp, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (word order, articles, plural), và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh. Tránh lặp từ như "they are they are"; dùng từ phù hợp như "students" thay vì "student"; nói rõ vì sao học sinh dùng xe đạp và nêu tình hình phổ biến của xe máy. Giữ 2–3 câu liên kết bằng "because" hoặc "however".

示例: Bicycles are quite popular among school students because many are too young to ride motorbikes. However, motorcycles remain the dominant form of transport for adults in my country because they are faster and more convenient.

× So I practice every day with my mom in my house until I could ride on.

✓ So I practiced every day with my mom at home until I could ride it.

The sentence describes a past habitual action, so the verb should be in past simple (practiced). Use 'at home' instead of 'in my house' for natural phrasing. 'Ride on' is incorrect; use 'ride it' or simply 'ride' referring to the bike. Also keep tense consistency with 'when I was 6' which requires past tense.

× I think by our only populars we student because they are they are not enough age to use different vehicle.

✓ I think only students like us are popular with bikes because we are not old enough to use other vehicles.

There are multiple issues: 'populars' is incorrect pluralization; 'students' is the correct plural noun. Word order and articles need adjustment: 'only students like us' conveys meaning. 'They are not enough age' should be 'we are not old enough' (adjective order and pronoun). 'Different vehicle' should be plural 'other vehicles'. This correction addresses singular/plural and improves sentence structure while keeping intended meaning.

× I think by our only populars we student because they are they are not enough age to use different vehicle.

✓ I think only students like us prefer bikes because we are not old enough to use other vehicles.

Pronoun use is incorrect: 'we student' should be 'we students' or 'students like us'. 'They are they are' is redundant and wrong; replace with 'we are'. Use consistent pronouns referring to the speaker (we) rather than 'they'. This makes the sentence coherent and grammatically correct.

× However motorbike always take the lead in my country.

✓ However, motorbikes always take the lead in my country.

The subject 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'always take' or alternatively use singular with 'takes'. Here 'motorbikes always take' is natural. Also add a comma after 'However' for clarity. The error relates to correct verb form agreement with plural subject (subject-verb agreement).