自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and relevant: the examiner asked about a bike, but your answer mentions a bag, which is off-topic and reduces clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence about having a bike, then give one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it, memories) using linking words. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was four years old as a birthday present from my parents. It was bright red and I remember learning to ride it in the park near our house, which made me feel very independent.

建议: Good direct answer and clear opinion, but improve coherence and specificity. Use linking words to connect ideas and give concrete examples or reasons (e.g., traffic, cost, environment). Also correct minor phrasing issues (e.g., 'prefer to ride bikes rather than walk or drive'). Keep to 2–4 concise sentences.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people choose cycling because it is cheaper and faster than driving in busy cities, and it also helps reduce traffic and pollution.

× You know, in my country many people prefer to ride bikes to walk or even go outside.

✓ You know, in my country many people prefer riding bikes to walking or even going outside.

The verb after 'prefer' can be followed by either the gerund (verb+ing) or the infinitive, but when comparing two activities using 'prefer ... to ...' the gerund should be used for both verbs for parallel structure. Change 'prefer to ride bikes to walk' to 'prefer riding bikes to walking' to keep forms parallel and natural.

× They think bike is a really convenient transport.

✓ They think bikes are a really convenient means of transport.

'Bike' should be plural ('bikes') to match 'they' thinking about people in general. Also, 'transport' as a noun often needs a determiner or a different collocation; 'means of transport' is a natural phrase. Use 'are' for plural agreement with 'bikes.'