自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is direct and natural, but it's too short and lacks supporting detail. To improve, give a brief topic sentence then one or two specific details (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it to you, how often you rode it). Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you add another point (e.g., "and", "also", "because").

示例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

建议: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, which is good, but it has minor grammar issues and could be clearer and more concise. Start with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "however", "because", "now"). Avoid passive or vague phrasing like "doing a good job"—provide a concrete example of improvements.

示例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, but people used to avoid cycling because city infrastructure was poor. However, the government has recently added protected bike lanes and bike-sharing stations, so more people are starting to cycle now.

× It is popular but due to the bad infrastructure in our city, people couldn't really ride bikes that much.

✓ They are popular, but due to the bad infrastructure in our city, people couldn't really ride bikes that much.

The original sentence uses 'It is popular' to refer to 'bikes', which is a plural noun. This is a third person singular issue: the subject and verb must agree in number. Change 'It is' to 'They are' to match the plural noun 'bikes'. Additionally, keep tense consistent: 'couldn't' is past ability, which is acceptable here because the speaker contrasts past limitations with current improvements. Suggestion: use 'They are popular' when speaking generally about bikes in the present.

× But now our government is doing a good job and improving the bike roads.

✓ But now our government is doing a good job and is improving the bike lanes.

The original sentence is mostly correct in tense (present continuous) but has a vocabulary/word choice issue: 'bike roads' is awkward in English. Replace with 'bike lanes' which is the common term. Also keep parallel verb forms: 'is doing' and 'is improving' maintain consistent present continuous. Suggestion: use 'bike lanes' or 'cycle lanes' for natural phrasing.