自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer shows misunderstanding of the examiner’s question and has grammar errors. First, correct the vocabulary: the examiner asked about a “bike” (bicycle), not a “pie.” Then answer directly with a short topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use simple past tense and a clear subject: “I had…” or “I didn’t have…”. For example, mention who owned the bike, when you used it, or a brief reason why you did or did not have one.

示例: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I often borrowed my neighbour’s bicycle to ride to the park. For example, every Saturday I’d ride about ten minutes with my friend, which was how I learned to be confident on the road.

建议: The student misunderstood words again (“price” instead of “bikes”) and repeated the examiner’s question rather than answering it. First, recognize the key word “bikes” and answer with an opinion sentence (e.g., “Yes, bikes are popular…” or “No, they aren’t very popular…”). Then give one or two specific supporting details (who uses them, for what reasons, or where they are common). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep responses concise and grammatically correct.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to avoid traffic and save money. For example, students and delivery workers often cycle in cities, while people in rural areas use bicycles for short trips to the market.

× Did you have a pie when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the wrong noun 'pie' instead of 'bike' and omitted the article 'a' before 'child'. The question asks about possession of a bike in the past, so the correct noun is 'bike'. Also English requires the article 'a' in the phrase 'a child'. Suggestion: listen carefully to the examiner's word choice, use the correct vocabulary, and remember fixed expressions like 'when you were a child'.

× Do you think price are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student replaced 'bikes' with the singular noun 'price', which is semantically incorrect, and used 'the country' instead of 'your country' which changes reference. 'Price' is singular and does not match the plural verb 'are'; the original question asked about 'bikes', so the correct noun is 'bikes' (plural) and 'your country' matches the examiner's question. Suggestion: match the noun to the intended meaning and maintain correct reference words like 'your country'.