自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles, and add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Avoid tense inconsistency and minor grammar errors (e.g., use 'had' for past, 'gave me a bicycle', 'I usually spent' or 'I used to spend').

示例: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle from about the age of five because my parents gave me one as a birthday present. I used to ride it twice a week in the local park, and that helped me become confident cycling on roads later.

建议: Make your response clearer by using correct verb forms and clearer reasoning. Begin with a direct topic sentence (present tense for general statements), then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrasing and incorrect verbs (e.g., 'I rarely see people riding bicycles').

示例: I think bikes used to be more popular, but their use has declined recently. For example, many people now prefer cars or public transport because cities are more developed, and in addition, busy work schedules leave less time for leisure cycling.

× My parents gave me as a birthday gift and I usually spend twice a week riding a bicycle in the park.

✓ My parents gave me a bicycle as a birthday gift, and I usually spent time riding it in the park twice a week.

The original sentence misplaces objects and mixes tenses. 'Gave me as a birthday gift' is missing the object 'a bicycle'; correct order is 'gave me a bicycle as a birthday gift'. The student then uses 'usually spend' (present) while describing a past habitual action—context is childhood, so past tense 'usually spent' is required. Also 'riding a bicycle' is fine but pronoun 'it' clarifies reference. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for events in childhood and place objects in correct order (verb + indirect object + direct object).

× In my opinion, in my country bikes were popular, but now I rarely seen people writing a bicycle because though my country is developed so that people always have a hectic schedule to spend time.

✓ In my opinion, bikes used to be popular in my country, but now I rarely see people riding bicycles because, although my country is developed, people always have hectic schedules and little free time.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'bikes were popular' is acceptable but 'used to be popular' better expresses a past state contrasted with the present. 'I rarely seen' is incorrect; the correct present tense form is 'I rarely see' (subject-verb agreement and tense). 'Writing a bicycle' is incorrect — should be 'riding bicycles'. The phrase 'because though' is redundant; use 'because' or 'although' but not both. 'So that people always have a hectic schedule to spend time' is ungrammatical — use 'people always have hectic schedules and little free time' to convey the meaning. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits/states, ensure present simple for current observations, and choose correct verbs ('see', 'ride') and coherent connectors ('because' or 'although').