自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, use correct grammar and give a short elaboration. Say whether you had one, then give a simple reason using correct tense and vocabulary. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, use past tense: “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one.” Then add one brief supporting detail, e.g. how you got around instead.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or took public transport, and I sometimes borrowed a bike from a neighbor for short trips.

建议: Answer directly and clearly, use present simple for general opinions, and give specific reasons with linking words. Correctly refer to your country (e.g., "in Hong Kong") and explain why bikes are or aren’t popular: mention factors like price, space, or transport options. Keep it concise and coherent.

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong because the city is crowded and there isn’t much space for cycling. Also, many people prefer using the efficient public transport system, and bike ownership can be less convenient and sometimes expensive in urban areas.

× No, because I am a poor.

✓ No, because I was poor.

The student used the adjective 'poor' with the verb 'am' in past context. The question asks about childhood, so past tense should be used. Use 'was' for first person singular in past. Also 'poor' is an adjective describing a state; no article 'a' is needed. Suggestion: say 'I was poor' or 'I didn't have much money.'

× No, I think the price is not popular in the Hong Kong because I so I cannot see the price in the Hong Kong.

✓ No, I think bicycles are not popular in Hong Kong because they are expensive, so I don't see many of them there.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun/reference and awkward phrasing. 'The price is not popular' is incorrect—things (like popularity) apply to people or items, not price; 'Hong Kong' should not take the definite article 'the'; 'I so I cannot see' is ungrammatical. Correct by stating the subject ('bicycles') and using an adjective 'expensive' to explain low popularity, omit 'the' before 'Hong Kong', and use proper conjunction and tense: 'so I don't see many of them there.' Suggestion: use clear subject, correct articles, and link clauses properly.