自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention when you had it, how you used it, and a brief feeling or result to make the answer natural and informative. Keep to no more than 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I did — I got my first bike when I was about seven. I rode it almost every day after school, usually to visit friends in the neighborhood, and it helped me learn balance and confidence. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite comfortable cycling on busy streets by the time I was ten.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words. Mention who uses bikes, for which purposes, and any trends or differences between places (e.g., cities vs rural areas). Keep responses concise and natural (1–3 supporting sentences).

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for commuting because of heavy traffic and affordable bike lanes, while in rural areas they are mainly used for short errands. In recent years, shared-bike schemes have also made cycling more widespread.

× Yes, it is popular.

✓ Yes, they are popular.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student replied using the singular pronoun 'it', which does not agree with the plural noun. This is a pronoun reference and number agreement error. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to match 'bikes'. Suggestion: Identify the subject (bikes = plural) and ensure pronoun and verb are in plural form (they are).