自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp cơ bản (thời quá khứ và cấu trúc), làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và súc tích theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lỗi như “I'm were” và thiếu động từ trong “I really happy”. Dùng liên từ ngắn để nối ý (e.g., “and”, “which”, “so”) và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: việc bạn đã làm với chiếc xe).

示例: Yes, I did. I had a pretty pink bicycle when I was a child, which my parents gave me for my birthday. I used to ride it to the park every weekend, and it made me feel very proud.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề hoàn chỉnh và mở rộng với lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., “electric scooters” hoặc “motorbikes”), nối các câu bằng liên từ và đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh để làm rõ quan điểm.

示例: Not really. Bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer electric scooters or motorbikes for convenience, especially for commuting. For example, in my city many streets are crowded with electric scooters during rush hour.

× I had a pretty pink bicycle when I'm were a child.

✓ I had a pretty pink bicycle when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm' and past tense 'were'. The clause refers to a past time, so use the past simple 'was' with the subject 'I'. Suggestion: replace 'I'm were' with 'I was'. Use consistent past tense for time references.

× My parents bought it for me in my birthday party.

✓ My parents bought it for me at my birthday party.

The verb 'bought' is correct past tense, but the preposition is wrong. In English we use 'at' (or 'for') with 'birthday party', not 'in'. Also 'my birthday party' is the correct noun phrase. Suggestion: use 'at my birthday party'. Alternatively, 'for my birthday' is also natural.

× I really happy about that.

✓ I was really happy about that.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past state. 'Really happy' is an adjective phrase describing the past feeling, so include the past linking verb 'was'. Suggestion: write 'I was really happy about that.'

× Not so popular in my country.

✓ They are not so popular in my country.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. To answer the question about bikes generally, include a subject 'they' (referring to bikes) and the verb 'are' in present simple. Suggestion: use a complete sentence like 'They are not so popular in my country.'

× They often ride electric vehicles or electric bike.

✓ They often ride electric vehicles or electric bikes.

The phrase mixes plural and singular forms. When listing alternatives, match number forms: 'electric vehicles' and 'electric bikes' (plural). Also 'ride' is fine for vehicles. Suggestion: use plural 'electric bikes' to parallel 'electric vehicles'.