学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời rõ ràng nhưng lặp từ và cấu trúc; cần trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề ngắn, tránh lặp thông tin, dùng liên từ để thêm chi tiết chính xác và tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I study at Taiwan B High School' thay vì 'a Taiwan B high school') và giới hạn độ dài trong 3–4 câu.

示例: I’m a student at Taiwan B High School, where I’ve been studying for three years. I’m currently in the final year, focusing on science subjects, and I enjoy my classes because the teachers are supportive.

建议: Câu trả lời rất lặp và thiếu thông tin mới; cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại cùng một ý, và cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ khu vực trường, chương trình học). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý cho mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I study at Taiwan B High School, which is located in the city center. I’m enrolled in the science program, and the campus has good labs that help with my practical lessons.

建议: Ý chính rõ nhưng có nhiều tiếng lấp chỗ (umm) và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh; cần nói gọn, tránh tiếng lấp, hoàn thành câu và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể nhằm chứng minh quan điểm (ví dụ: thư viện, Wi‑Fi, giờ học). Dùng liên từ như 'because' và 'for example' hợp lý hơn.

示例: Yes, I think it’s a good place to study because the campus is usually quiet and the library has free Wi‑Fi. For example, I often study there in the afternoon when it’s peaceful and I can concentrate on my work.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ không phù hợp ('lazy engine', 'collect trash'); cần diễn đạt rõ ràng vấn đề và đề xuất thay đổi cụ thể. Trình bày một hoặc hai thay đổi, giải thích lý do và nêu một giải pháp khả thi. Tránh câu dài lộn xộn.

示例: I would like better lighting and more quiet study rooms because poor lighting makes reading difficult and noise distracts students. For example, the school could install brighter LED lights and designate silent study zones with clear rules.

建议: Ý định có nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng, nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp ('IL', '4°', 'it is interest me'); cần trình bày kế hoạch rõ: chọn ngành, lý do cụ thể, và bước tiếp theo. Dùng cấu trúc chủ đề + 1–2 câu hỗ trợ, kiểm tra ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác.

示例: I plan to study computer science at a local university next year because the field offers many job opportunities and interests me. After my degree I hope to work as a software developer or continue with a master’s degree.

× Well, I am a student, I study at a Taiwan B high school and I have been studying there for about 3 years.

✓ Well, I am a student. I study at Taiwan B High School and have been studying there for about three years.

The original sentence contains tense and sentence structure issues: run-on sentences and inconsistent capitalization. Split into two sentences and keep present simple for current facts (I study) and present perfect continuous for duration (have been studying). Use 'Taiwan B High School' as a proper noun and write numbers as words in formal speech.

× Well, I am still doing a Taiwanese high school and I study there. In Taiwan high school, I have been studying for three years.

✓ Well, I am still attending a Taiwanese high school and I study there. At the Taiwanese high school, I have been studying for three years.

Use 'attending' (present continuous) or 'attend' to describe being enrolled; 'doing' is informal and unclear. Use the article 'a' or 'the' appropriately: 'a Taiwanese high school' when general, 'the Taiwanese high school' when referring to a specific school. Ensure consistency and avoid repetition.

× Well, I think it's a a good place to study because it's usually quiet and there are umm in the library like this entry and free Wi-Fi for example. I often go there is in the afternoon and I can.

✓ Well, I think it's a good place to study because it's usually quiet, and the library has study areas and free Wi-Fi, for example. I often go there in the afternoon.

Remove filler words and fix duplicate 'a a'. Clarify 'there are ... in the library' to 'the library has study areas'. Correct 'I often go there is in the afternoon' to 'I often go there in the afternoon'. Finish sentences with complete ideas.

× Well I would like the place where I study to have better lighting and more quiet rooms because it is a sometime lazy engine and I and that make it hard to collect trash.

✓ Well, I would like the place where I study to have better lighting and quieter rooms because it is sometimes messy and that makes it hard to keep clean.

Use comparative adjective 'quieter' not 'more quiet'. 'Sometime lazy engine' is incorrect and unclear; replace with 'sometimes messy' or 'untidy'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'that makes' not 'that make'. Use appropriate vocabulary.

× For example they could ask a few study and flick the lights so.

✓ For example, they could ask a few students to study and keep the lights on, or install motion-sensor lighting.

Original phrase is ungrammatical and unclear: 'ask a few study' should be 'ask a few students'. 'Flick the lights' contradicts desire for better lighting; clarify intent. Provide grammatically correct alternatives and clearer meaning.

× Well, I think the main reason I want to study IL is because it has many job opportunity and a it is interest me.

✓ Well, I think the main reason I want to study IL is because it has many job opportunities and it interests me.

Use plural 'opportunities' (count noun) and correct verb 'interest' to 'interests' for subject 'it' (third person singular). Ensure no extraneous articles ('a it').

× I plan to study at local university next year for a 4° and I will show.

✓ I plan to study at a local university next year for a four-year degree, and I will apply soon.

Add the article 'a' before 'local university'. '4°' is unclear; use 'four-year degree'. 'I will show' is incomplete and unclear; replace with a plausible verb like 'apply' or 'enroll'. Use future intention appropriately.