学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và trực tiếp, nhưng có thể tự nhiên hơn bằng cách nối hai câu và thêm một chút thông tin cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: 'at university' và 'at University of...') và dùng mệnh đề giới hạn để câu gọn hơn.

示例: I'm currently a student at the University of Medicine and Pharmacy in my city, where I'm studying to become a doctor.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi phát âm/ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp nêu nơi học và chuyên ngành, rồi giải thích ngắn gọn về lý do chọn ngành. Tránh những tiếng ừ/thở dài không cần thiết và sửa lỗi dùng từ (ví dụ 'major is nothing').

示例: I study at the University of Medicine and Pharmacy in my city, majoring in general medicine because I want to help people and work in clinical care.

建议: Ý chính đã nêu nhưng câu có lỗi cấu trúc và nhiều tiếng ngắt quãng. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. Sửa ngữ pháp ('does university has' → 'the university has') và chọn từ phù hợp ('supportive' thay vì 'sportive').

示例: Yes, I think it's a great place to study because the university has modern facilities and a supportive learning environment, and it offers many opportunities for clinical practice.

建议: Ý tốt nhưng ngôn ngữ lộn xộn và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp ('look like' sai, 'appraise' sai từ, 'cell studying space' không rõ). Hãy nói trực tiếp bạn muốn thay đổi gì, dùng từ chính xác (improve/upgrade, study spaces, modern equipment) và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: Yes. I would like the university to upgrade its facilities, especially the library and study areas, by adding more modern equipment and creating more quiet study spaces for students.

建议: Nội dung phù hợp nhưng có các tiếng ngập ngừng và một cụm từ không chính xác ('set international medical resource'). Nên nêu mục tiêu rõ ràng, giảm tiếng lặp, và dùng cụm từ đúng (access international medical resources / work in international settings).

示例: In the future I plan to complete my medical degree and keep improving my professional knowledge. I also hope to improve my English so that I can access international medical resources and collaborate with colleagues abroad.

× UH are three at the University of Medicine and Pharmacy in the city.

✓ I am at the University of Medicine and Pharmacy in the city.

The student used 'are' and 'three' incorrectly; the subject is 'I' which requires the singular verb 'am'. Use 'I am' to indicate location. Suggestion: start sentences with the correct pronoun and verb: 'I am at...'.

× My major is nothing In the future.

✓ My major is medicine.

The original sentence 'My major is nothing In the future.' is ungrammatical and unclear. The student likely intended to state their major. Provide a clear noun phrase: 'My major is medicine.' If they intended future plans, separate sentences: 'My major is medicine. In the future, I want to help people.'.

× In the future. I want to, I want to help people.

✓ In the future, I want to help people.

Fragmentation and repetition create awkward phrasing. Combine into one sentence using present-tense 'want' to express future intention: 'In the future, I want to help people.' Ensure punctuation and sentence flow are correct.

× Uh, yes, I think is a good place to study.

✓ Uh, yes, I think it is a good place to study.

Missing subject 'it' before 'is'. When making statements about a place, include the dummy subject 'it' or refer explicitly: 'I think it is...' or 'I think the university is...'.

× Uh does university has appeared letters umm and a sportive learning environment.

✓ The university has a supportive learning environment and modern facilities.

Original sentence has several issues: wrong auxiliary 'does' with 'has', incorrect verb 'appeared', and incorrect word 'sportive'. Use correct subject-verb agreement: 'The university has...' Also use appropriate vocabulary: 'supportive learning environment' and 'modern facilities'.

× It also provides students with many opportunities for clinical practice.

✓ It also provides students with many opportunities for clinical practice.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Keep as is. It correctly uses 'provides' with subject 'It' and the noun phrase 'opportunities for clinical practice'.

× Yeah, yes, I look like the the university to appraise some facilities such as the library and studying areas.

✓ Yes, I would like the university to improve some facilities, such as the library and study areas.

'Look like' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'would like'. 'Appraise' means to evaluate, but context requires 'improve' or 'upgrade'. 'Studying areas' should be 'study areas'. Use modal 'would like' for polite requests and correct noun forms.

× More modern equipment and additional cell studying space could also be helpful.

✓ More modern equipment and additional quiet study spaces could also be helpful.

'Cell studying space' is incorrect. Likely intended 'quiet study spaces' or 'additional study space'. Use adjectives correctly: 'quiet study spaces' or 'additional study spaces'. Ensure plural forms match: 'spaces' with 'additional'.

× Uh, in the future, uh, I plan to complete my medical degree and continue improving my professional knowledge.

✓ In the future, I plan to complete my medical degree and continue improving my professional knowledge.

This sentence is acceptable but remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Tense and structure are correct: 'plan to complete' and 'continue improving' express future intentions appropriately.

× I also hope to develop my English skills so that I can set international medical resource.

✓ I also hope to develop my English skills so that I can access international medical resources.

The phrase 'set international medical resource' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'access international medical resources'. Use verb 'access' and plural 'resources'. Ensure purpose clause 'so that I can...' is followed by correct verb + object.