机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: You did not answer the question and mainly repeated it, with several listening and pronunciation errors, such as “your activities” instead of “new activities” and “as a chin” instead of “as a child.” Begin with a direct answer, such as “Yes, I did,” and add one or two specific details about the activities you tried. Keep your response to no more than five sentences.

示例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had the opportunity to try swimming and drawing. I especially enjoyed swimming because it was fun and helped me stay healthy.

建议: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of expressing your own opinion. Start with a clear position, such as “Yes, I think they should,” and support it with a reason and a relevant example. Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example” to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I think people should try different things because this helps them discover their interests and strengths. For example, someone might try cooking, sports, or learning a language before finding an activity they truly enjoy.

建议: You did not provide an answer and appear to have misheard or mispronounced several words: “taking on” became “thinking on,” and “opportunities” became “apprentice.” Answer directly and explain why you do or do not like new opportunities. Include a specific example to make your response more effective.

示例: Yes, I do. I like taking on new opportunities because they help me learn and become more confident. For example, I recently joined a photography class, even though I had never used a professional camera before.

建议: You repeated the question rather than answering it. Give a direct response using “Yes, I do” or “No, I don’t,” and then explain how you usually receive opportunities. Add a specific example and connect your ideas with words such as “usually,” “because,” or “for example.”

示例: Yes, I do, although most of my opportunities come from school and friends. For example, my teacher recently invited me to join a public-speaking competition, which allowed me to improve my communication skills.

× Do you like thinking on new apprentice?

✓ Do you like thinking about a new apprentice?

The preposition about is used after think when referring to the subject of your thoughts. In addition, a singular countable noun such as apprentice requires an article. However, this correction changes the meaning of the examiner's question; to answer that question naturally, say: Yes, I do. I like taking on new opportunities.