机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly using the past tense. Explain who you did these activities with and add a specific detail about one activity. Avoid using “we’re playing,” because you are describing childhood experiences; use “we played” instead. You could also use a linking word such as “For example” to introduce a supporting detail.

示例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. For example, my friends and I often played wrestling and boxing games after school. It was a fun way to stay active and spend time together.

建议: Give a clear opinion at the beginning and support it with a reason and a specific example. Avoid repetition and unclear expressions such as “Every day he pass on.” Use “people” or “we” consistently, and use correct subject-verb agreement, such as “people should learn” rather than “he pass.” Linking words like “because” and “for example” will make your answer more coherent.

示例: Yes, I think people should try different things whenever possible because it helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone who tries cooking, sports, or photography may find a hobby they really enjoy. It can also make life more interesting.

× Yeah, we're playing together every day, like wrestling or boxing.

✓ Yeah, we were playing together every day, like wrestling or boxing.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Were playing is the past continuous form of are playing and correctly describes an activity that happened regularly in the past.

× Every day he pass on, people must learn something new.

✓ Every day that passes, people must learn something new.

The singular subject every day requires the third-person singular verb passes, not pass. The phrase every day that passes is also the grammatically correct expression for describing each day as it goes by.