机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer in the past tense because you are describing your childhood: use “went” instead of “go.” Also, say “wrestling” or “wrestling classes” rather than “play wrestling.” Add one specific detail, such as who you trained with or what you enjoyed about the activity, to make the answer more developed.

示例: Yes, I had the opportunity to take wrestling classes after school. I went twice a week with some of my classmates, and I really enjoyed learning new techniques and becoming more confident.

建议: Give a clear opinion and explain it with natural expressions. Replace “to be with the reality” with “to understand the real world” or “to gain a better understanding of life.” Use a linking word such as “because” and include a specific example or result. Avoid repeated fillers such as “uh.”

示例: Yes, I think people should try different activities because it helps them gain experience and understand the real world better. For example, trying a new sport or learning a skill can help people discover their interests and become more confident.

× Yeah, after school I go to play wrestling.

✓ Yeah, after school I went wrestling.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change go to went. The natural expression is went wrestling rather than go to play wrestling.

× Of course, uh, to have more experience and uh, to be with the reality, uh.

✓ Of course, people should try as many different things as they can to gain more experience and stay in touch with reality.

The original answer begins with infinitives, to have and to be, but it does not contain a complete main clause with a subject and a finite verb. Add people should try to make the sentence complete. Also, stay in touch with reality is the natural expression instead of be with the reality.

× Of course, uh, to have more experience and uh, to be with the reality, uh.

✓ Of course, people should try as many different things as they can to gain more experience and stay in touch with reality.

The preposition with is not used in the expression be with the reality. The natural preposition in the phrase stay in touch with reality is with, and reality is normally used without the definite article in this expression.