机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer directly addresses the question and includes a clear reason. However, the ideas are somewhat repetitive because you repeat that you did not take part in activities several times. Use more natural expressions such as “I was quite a shy and reserved child” instead of “a closed off child,” and say “I didn’t like going out or socializing” rather than “I didn’t like going somewhere.” Add one specific example of an activity you missed to make the answer more detailed and effective.

示例: No, not really. I was quite a shy and reserved child, so I didn’t often go out or socialize with other children. For example, I usually avoided sports clubs and preferred staying at home reading or watching TV. Looking back, I wish I had been more willing to try new activities.

建议: You give a clear opinion and a reason, but “breathtaking” is not the most natural word for trying activities; “exciting,” “rewarding,” or “eye-opening” would be more suitable. Also, “every different things” is grammatically incorrect; say “as many different things as possible” or “everything they can.” Avoid making the claim too absolute with “they have to,” and include a specific example or result to develop your answer.

示例: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because new experiences can be exciting and eye-opening. For instance, someone who takes up a new sport may discover a hidden talent and meet new people. However, they should choose activities that suit their interests and not feel pressured to try everything.

× So if a person wants to explore the world, they have to try every different things they can.

✓ So if a person wants to explore the world, they have to try every different thing they can.

The quantifier every must be followed by a singular countable noun, so things should be changed to thing. Alternatively, you can say all the different things they can to use a plural noun correctly.