机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你基本上重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答“小时候参加过哪些新活动”。应先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，然后补充具体活动、参加原因和感受。注意使用正确表达，如“take part in new activities”，不要说“take part in your activities as a channel”。建议回答2—3句话，并使用“because”“for example”等连接词展开。

示例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I tried swimming and joined a school art club because I wanted to learn new skills. I especially enjoyed swimming because it made me feel confident and energetic.

建议: 你只是重复了问题，没有表达自己的观点。应先明确说明“我认为应该/不应该”，然后给出一个理由和具体例子。可以使用“because”“for instance”连接观点和细节；同时注意自然表达，通常说“Should people...”而不是“Should the people...”。

示例: Yes, I think people should try different things, especially when they are young. It helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For instance, trying photography or volunteering may lead to a new hobby or even a future career.

× Should the people try as many different things as they can

✓ Should people try as many different things as they can?

当 people 表示“人们”这一泛指群体时，通常不使用定冠词 the。只有在指特定的一群人时，才使用 the people，例如 the people in this town。改进建议：表达一般观点时，复数可数名词前通常直接使用，不要随意添加 the。