机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Avoid unnatural phrases such as “I have various opportunities,” “hard work activities,” and “days and events happened.” Use specific examples and connect them with linking words such as “for example” and “also.” Keep the answer to three or four clear sentences, and use correct forms such as “I had,” “I had to make,” and “I participated.”

示例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. For example, my school organized sports days and cultural events, so I took part in singing, dancing, and relay races. I especially enjoyed the cultural events because they helped me become more confident in front of other people.

建议: State your opinion with the correct structure: “People should try different things.” Then explain one or two clear benefits, such as discovering interests, developing skills, or becoming more confident. Avoid repetition in “different things” and “lot of lot of value values.” Use “be interested in,” not “can interested,” and include a specific example to make your answer more effective.

示例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. Trying new things helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For instance, a child who joins a sports club may realize that they enjoy teamwork and become more confident. However, they should choose activities that genuinely interest them rather than trying everything.

× Yes, I have various opportunities to take part in new activities.

✓ Yes, I had various opportunities to take part in new activities.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change have to had because these opportunities occurred in the past.

× If I talk about my school time, I have lot of activities to participate in.

✓ If I talk about my school time, I had a lot of activities to participate in.

The quantifier lot of must be preceded by a, forming a lot of. Since the activities belonged to the student's school years, use the past form had.

× It's maybe sports activities or some hard work activities.

✓ They were maybe sports activities or some hard work activities.

The answer describes activities from the student's childhood, so the past tense were is more appropriate than the present-tense form is.

× It's maybe sports activities or some hard work activities.

✓ They were maybe sports activities or some hard work activities.

The subject refers to multiple activities, so a plural subject and plural verb are needed. Use they were instead of it is.

× There are various days and events happened in my school where I have to made things and participate in singing, dancing.

✓ There were various days and events at my school when I had to make things and participate in singing and dancing.

The events happened in the past, so use there were instead of there are. There were agrees with the plural noun phrase various days and events.

× There are various days and events happened in my school where I have to made things and participate in singing, dancing.

✓ There were various days and events at my school when I had to make things and participate in singing and dancing.

The original sentence incorrectly places happened directly after events and uses where for a time-related situation. Use when to introduce the time clause, and place the time expression at my school more naturally.

× There are various days and events happened in my school where I have to made things and participate in singing, dancing.

✓ There were various days and events at my school when I had to make things and participate in singing and dancing.

Because the student is describing past school events, have to should be changed to had to.

× There are various days and events happened in my school where I have to made things and participate in singing, dancing.

✓ There were various days and events at my school when I had to make things and participate in singing and dancing.

After have to or had to, use the base form of the verb. Therefore, made must be changed to make.

× Yes, in my opinion people try different things as they can because from different things they can learn lot of lot of value values and also they get to know about different things.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can because they can learn a lot of valuable things from different experiences and also get to know about different things.

The question asks whether people should try different things, so the answer should include the modal verb should. The structure should try expresses advice or recommendation.

× Yes, in my opinion people try different things as they can because from different things they can learn lot of lot of value values and also they get to know about different things.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can because they can learn a lot of valuable things from different experiences and also get to know about different things.

Use as many different things as they can with a plural countable noun. Also, a lot of is the correct quantifier phrase; lot of and lot of value values are incorrect forms.

× Yes, in my opinion people try different things as they can because from different things they can learn lot of lot of value values and also they get to know about different things.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, people should try as many different things as they can because they can learn a lot of valuable things from different experiences and also get to know about different things.

Valuable is the adjective needed to describe things. Value is normally a noun, so it cannot be used in the form value values in this sentence.

× I think a child can do things in which he or she can interested.

✓ I think a child can do things that he or she can be interested in.

The modal verb can must be followed by a base verb. Since interested is an adjective, it needs the linking verb be: can be interested.

× I think a child can do things in which he or she can interested.

✓ I think a child can do things that he or she can be interested in.

The correct expression is be interested in something. The preposition in should appear after interested in this relative clause.