机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and complete your example. Use the past tense consistently: “tended,” “wanted,” and “would.” Avoid repetition such as “he will he would,” and use more natural expressions like “fit into society” instead of “fit in to the social context.” Also, explain what you learned from the activity so that your answer has a clear result.

示例: Yes, my father often encouraged me to take part in different activities, especially social ones, because he wanted me to become more confident around other people. For example, he would ask me to go into a bank and speak to the cashier by myself. Although I felt nervous at first, this helped me improve my communication skills.

建议: Your opinion is clear, but the answer would be more natural and precise with better word choice and grammar. Replace “put social skills” and “put environmental skills” with “develop social and practical skills” or another specific phrase. Use a linking word such as “because” to explain your reason, and give a concrete example of how trying different activities benefits people.

示例: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities rather than focus exclusively on one skill. This is because different experiences can help them develop a wider range of abilities, such as communication, teamwork, and practical skills. For instance, someone who joins a sports club and volunteers in the community may become both healthier and more confident.

× Yes, my father tend to involve me in a lot of activities, mostly social activities because he wanted me to fit in to the social context.

✓ Yes, my father tends to involve me in a lot of activities, mostly social activities, because he wanted me to fit in to the social context.

The subject my father is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must take the -s form: tends, not tend. Remember to add -s or -es to a present-tense verb when the subject is he, she, it, or a singular noun.

× Yes, my father tend to involve me in a lot of activities, mostly social activities because he wanted me to fit in to the social context.

✓ Yes, my father tends to involve me in a lot of activities, mostly social activities, because he wanted me to fit into the social context.

The verb fit is followed by the preposition into when it means becoming accepted in a group or environment. The correct phrase is fit into, not fit in to. Learn common verb-preposition combinations as fixed phrases.

× For example, he will he would force me to go to banks and start talking to the cashier and try

✓ For example, he would force me to go to banks, start talking to the cashier, and try to communicate with people.

The answer describes repeated actions during the student’s childhood, so would is appropriate for a habitual action in the past. Will refers to the future and does not fit this past-time context. Also, he will he would is a repetition; use only he would.