机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về thời điểm (dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp), ngắn gọn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại hoạt động, tần suất hoặc cảm xúc). Tránh câu quá dài và dùng động từ ở thì quá khứ: "I had" thay vì "I have".

示例: Yes, I did. I had many opportunities to join activities like swimming lessons and school clubs when I was a child because my parents encouraged me to make friends. I usually attended a club once a week and enjoyed meeting new people.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, giải thích lí do với 1–2 cụ thể (ví dụ: lợi ích, ví dụ minh họa), và dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý. Tránh từ nói lóng như "like" và sửa cấu trúc: "broaden their horizons". Giữ tối đa 3 câu.

示例: Yes, I think people should try different things because it helps them gain new skills and broaden their horizons. For example, travelling or learning a new hobby can teach you different perspectives and build confidence.

× Yes, of course. As a child I have numerous opportunities to join in different kinds of activities because my parents want me to socialize with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course. As a child I had numerous opportunities to join different kinds of activities because my parents wanted me to socialize with my friends.

The student mixes present perfect/present tense ('have', 'want') with reference to a past time 'As a child'. Use past simple ('had', 'wanted') for completed past situations. Also change 'join in different kinds of activities' to 'join different kinds of activities' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: keep tense consistent by using past simple when talking about childhood (I had, my parents wanted).

× Yes, of course, because it allows people to gain new experiences and open their horizons above the the other part of the world that they had had didn't had a chance to like explore.

✓ Yes, of course, because it allows people to gain new experiences and broaden their horizons to parts of the world they did not have a chance to explore.

Multiple issues: incorrect idiom 'open their horizons above', repeated 'the the', incorrect tense and auxiliary 'had had didn't had', and filler 'like'. The correct expression is 'broaden their horizons' and 'parts of the world they did not have a chance to explore' (past modal/ability). Use negative past simple 'did not have' rather than 'had had didn't had'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: use clear idiomatic expressions and avoid redundant words; keep tense consistent and use standard negative form 'did not have'.

× Besides they can.

✓ Besides, they can try new activities.

This is a sentence fragment lacking an object or complement after 'can'. 'Can' is a modal verb that requires a main verb to complete meaning. Add an appropriate verb phrase such as 'try new activities' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: always follow modal verbs with a base verb (can + verb) and include the object if needed.