机会— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Порада: Формуйте відповідь чітко та послідовно. Почніть із короткого загального твердження (topic sentence), потім додайте 1–2 конкретні деталі про види активностей і коли ви ними займалися. Уникайте граматичних помилок у часах (вживайте минулий простий для дитячих спогадів) і розділяйте речення комами або крапками, щоб відповідь була природною та лаконічною (не більше 3–4 речень).

示例: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I took part in dance classes regularly and also did aerial gymnastics for about two years. These activities helped me become more confident and physically fit.

建议: Порада: Дайте чітку позицію, а потім підкріпіть її 1–2 конкретними причинами або прикладами. Використовуйте зв'язки (for example, because, however) і уникайте повторів. Також сформулюйте відповідь більш збалансовано — можна згадати обмеження, але й переваги пробування нового. Використовуйте повні граматично правильні речення.

示例: I think it depends; not everyone can try many activities because of financial or time constraints. However, when possible, trying a few different things can be valuable for personal growth and discovering new interests.

× Yes, exactly. I have I had opportunities to take part in activities when I was a child.

✓ Yes, exactly. I had opportunities to take part in activities when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present perfect ('I have') with past simple ('I had' and 'when I was a child'). Because the time frame is specified (when I was a child), past simple should be used consistently. Use 'I had' to indicate completed actions in the past. Suggestion: remove the extraneous 'I have' and keep 'I had'.

× I have danced a lot I had done air dymnastic and gold.

✓ I danced a lot. I also did aerial gymnastics and played golf.

The original is ungrammatical and mixes tenses and forms ('I have danced' with 'I had done'). With the context referring to childhood (past), simple past tense ('I danced', 'I did') is appropriate. 'Air dymnastic' is incorrect vocabulary; the likely intended activities are 'aerial gymnastics' and 'golf'. Use 'played golf' rather than 'did gold'. Split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past for past activities and correct the activity names.

× No I think not really because they can they can don't have money and so on

✓ No, I don't think so, because they may not have money and so on.

The original repeats 'they can' and uses incorrect negative structure ('they can don't have'). To express possibility or lack of ability due to lack of money, use modal 'may' or structure 'might not' or 'do not'. 'I don't think so' is the correct way to negate the opinion. Suggestion: avoid repeating modals and use correct negative forms like 'do not' or 'may not' depending on intended meaning.'