疲惫— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly with a natural topic sentence, and use the correct forms: “a lot of assignments,” “at university,” and “This is very exhausting for me.” Avoid repeating the same idea and explain briefly how your workload affects you.

示例: Yes, I often feel tired because I have a lot of assignments at university. I usually have several deadlines in the same week, so I do not get enough time to rest. It can be exhausting, especially during exam periods.

建议: Give a clear situation or time when you feel tired instead of using unclear phrases such as “meet things with organization” and “adjust my energy with by extreme.” Use linking words accurately; “On the other hand” is not suitable because you are not contrasting two ideas. Also, say “assignments” in the plural.

示例: I usually feel tired late at night, especially when I have several assignments to finish. I often spend hours studying after my classes, so I become mentally exhausted. As a result, I find it difficult to concentrate the next morning.

建议: Use the present tense because the question asks about your usual habit: “When I feel exhausted, I take a quick nap.” Correct the verb forms and make the meaning clear. You can add a specific detail about the nap, such as its length and setting an alarm, but avoid the unclear phrase “to fight me” and the fragment “Oversleep of course.”

示例: When I feel exhausted, I usually take a quick nap for about 20 minutes. I set an alarm so that I do not oversleep. After that, I drink some water and feel refreshed enough to continue working.

建议: Answer the yes/no question immediately and use the correct structure “I prefer to stay at home.” The main idea is understandable, but “influence my mood to my friends” is unnatural; say “bring my bad mood into the group” or “affect my friends’ mood.” Use one clear reason and a supporting detail.

示例: No, I usually prefer to stay at home when I feel tired. I do not want to bring my bad mood into the group, so I rest and recharge first. Once I feel better, I can meet my friends and enjoy myself more.

× I frequently feel tired because I have a lot of assignment in my university.

✓ I frequently feel tired because I have a lot of assignments at my university.

Assignment is a countable noun, so it must be plural after a lot of. The preposition at is more natural when referring to studying or working at a university.

× This a very exhausted for me.

✓ This is very exhausting for me.

The sentence needs the linking verb is after This. Also, exhausted describes how a person feels, while exhausting describes something that causes tiredness.

× This a very exhausted for me.

✓ This is very exhausting for me.

Exhausted is normally used for people, whereas exhausting describes an activity or situation that makes someone tired. Therefore, exhausting is the correct adjective here.

× I feel overwhelmed at university because I have a lot of assignment.

✓ I feel overwhelmed at university because I have a lot of assignments.

Assignment is a countable noun. Because it follows a lot of, it should be in the plural form: assignments.

× On the other hand, I must meet things with organization.

✓ On the other hand, I must organize my tasks.

The original sentence uses an unnatural verb-object structure. Meet things does not express the intended meaning. Use the verb organize directly with the noun tasks.

× Because of this, I always adjust my energy with by extreme.

✓ Because of this, I always push myself to the extreme.

The prepositions with and by are incorrectly combined. The expression push myself to the extreme uses the correct preposition to and clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× When I was exhausted, I always attacking quick nap, even 20 minutes to sleeping and I set an alarm to fight me.

✓ When I feel exhausted, I always take a quick nap, even for 20 minutes, and I set an alarm to prevent myself from oversleeping.

The question asks about a usual present situation, so use feel instead of was exhausted. The present simple form take is needed after I, not attacking.

× When I was exhausted, I always attacking quick nap, even 20 minutes to sleeping and I set an alarm to fight me.

✓ When I feel exhausted, I always take a quick nap, even for 20 minutes, and I set an alarm to prevent myself from oversleeping.

After the preposition for, use the gerund form sleeping: for 20 minutes of sleeping is possible, but in this sentence for 20 minutes is the natural structure. After prevent someone from, use the gerund form oversleeping.

× When I was exhausted, I always attacking quick nap, even 20 minutes to sleeping and I set an alarm to fight me.

✓ When I feel exhausted, I always take a quick nap, even for 20 minutes, and I set an alarm to prevent myself from oversleeping.

The alarm is intended to stop the speaker from oversleeping, so the reflexive pronoun myself is needed after prevent. The pronoun me does not clearly show that the subject and object are the same person.

× Oversleep of course.

✓ I sometimes oversleep, of course.

The original expression is a sentence fragment because it does not have a subject. Add the subject I and use the present-tense verb oversleep to form a complete sentence.

× I feel overwhelmed. I prefer stay at home because I don't want to influence my mood to my friends.

✓ I feel overwhelmed. I prefer staying at home because I don't want to affect my friends' moods.

After prefer, the gerund form staying is appropriate. Prefer to stay is also possible. The phrase affect my friends' moods uses a more accurate verb structure than influence my mood to my friends.

× I feel overwhelmed. I prefer stay at home because I don't want to influence my mood to my friends.

✓ I feel overwhelmed. I prefer staying at home because I don't want to affect my friends' moods.

The preposition to is not used after affect in this meaning. Affect is a transitive verb, so it is followed directly by its object: affect my friends' moods.