疲惫— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly with a natural frequency expression such as “I often feel tired.” Then give a specific reason and explain what makes work tiring. Correct the grammar in “because of working” and “many tax will put,” and use “a lot of paperwork” or “many tasks” instead of the unclear phrase “many tax.” Keep the answer to two or three connected sentences.

示例: Yes, I often feel tired because I have a demanding job. When I arrive at the office, there is usually a lot of paperwork waiting for me, so I feel exhausted by the end of the day.

建议: State the time clearly, for example, “I usually feel tired during the workweek.” Use “throughout the week” rather than “along the week,” and replace “heavy work” with “a heavy workload.” For the final idea, say that you sleep in automatically or naturally on weekends; “let myself to sleep” and “in automation” are not natural expressions. Link the ideas with “because” or “so.”

示例: I usually feel tired throughout the workweek because I have a heavy workload from Monday to Friday. That’s why I sleep in on weekends and sometimes wake up naturally around noon.

建议: Begin with a clear answer and describe one or two actions logically. Use “play video games” for a general habit, and explain how gaming helps you relax. Avoid unclear phrases such as “archive of mission” and “ease me from cloning”; if you mean completing missions helps you forget work, say so directly. Remove fillers like “yeah” and avoid repeating “many.”

示例: When I feel tired, I usually play video games with my friends. The games help me relax because I can focus on completing different missions and forget about my work for a while.

建议: Give a direct answer and explain why you still go out. Use “after a long workweek” instead of “after working weeks,” and avoid repeating “together.” Since this describes a regular habit, use the present tense “they make me feel better,” not “they made me feel better.” Add a specific example of where you go, such as a café or restaurant, to make the answer more effective.

示例: Yes, I still go out with my friends, even when I’m tired. We usually meet at a café or have dinner together after a long workweek, and spending time with them helps me feel refreshed.

× I always have tough time at office because of many tax will put on my table after I arrive.

✓ I always have a tough time at the office because many taxes will be put on my table after I arrive.

The singular countable noun time needs the article a, and office needs the definite article the when referring to the speaker's workplace.

× I always have tough time at office because of many tax will put on my table after I arrive.

✓ I always have a tough time at the office because many taxes will be put on my table after I arrive.

Many must be followed by a plural countable noun, so tax should be taxes.

× I always have tough time at office because of many tax will put on my table after I arrive.

✓ I always have a tough time at the office because many taxes will be put on my table after I arrive.

The taxes receive the action, so the sentence needs the passive form will be put, not the active form will put.

× I usually feel tired along the week.

✓ I usually feel tired throughout the week.

Throughout is the appropriate preposition for describing something that happens during the whole period of a week.

× I started work on Monday and have heavy work along the week.

✓ I start work on Monday and have a heavy workload throughout the week.

The question asks about a regular situation, so the present tense start is more suitable than the past tense started. The phrase a heavy workload is also the natural expression for having a lot of work.

× I started work on Monday and have heavy work along the week.

✓ I start work on Monday and have a heavy workload throughout the week.

Throughout the week is the correct expression for a repeated situation that continues during the whole week.

× After Friday I will let myself to sleep and wake up late in automation.

✓ After Friday, I will let myself sleep and wake up late automatically.

The verb let is followed by an object and the base form of the verb, so let myself sleep is correct. Do not use to before sleep after let.

× After Friday I will let myself to sleep and wake up late in automation.

✓ After Friday, I will let myself sleep and wake up late automatically.

Automatically is the adverb needed to describe how the speaker wakes up. In automation is not the correct expression in this context.

× It allows me to relax and feel comfortable with many many maps in there.

✓ It allows me to relax and feel comfortable with many maps in it.

Many should not be unnecessarily repeated. Use many maps to express a large number of maps.

× It allows me to relax and feel comfortable with many many maps in there.

✓ It allows me to relax and feel comfortable with many maps in it.

The pronoun it clearly refers to the video game, so in it is more precise than the vague expression in there.

× I always archive of mission.

✓ I always achieve missions.

The original phrase does not contain a correctly formed verb phrase. A complete sentence needs a subject, a verb, and a suitable object. Missions is plural because the speaker is describing a repeated activity.

× It can ease me from cloning.

✓ It can ease me of stress.

Ease is commonly followed by of when referring to removing a burden or unpleasant feeling, as in ease someone of stress. The preposition from is not appropriate in this structure.

× We always hang out together after working weeks and we go to many places together together and they made me feel better after heavy week.

✓ We always hang out together after work each week, go to many places together, and they make me feel better after a heavy week.

The sentence describes a regular habit, so make should be in the present tense rather than the past tense made.

× We always hang out together after working weeks and we go to many places together together and they made me feel better after heavy week.

✓ We always hang out together after work each week, go to many places together, and they make me feel better after a heavy week.

The singular countable noun week needs the article a, so the correct phrase is after a heavy week.