疲惫— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and use correct tense and clear reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "No, I don't often feel tired.") then add one or two brief reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" or "since"). Avoid repetition and unrelated phrases.

示例: No, I don't often feel tired because I keep a regular routine. For example, I study for my exams in the morning and do light activities in the afternoon, which helps me stay energetic.

建议: Give a clear time frame and concise reasons with correct grammar. Begin with a direct answer (e.g., "I usually feel tired at the weekend") then explain why using linking words like "because" or "as". Provide one specific detail (travel time, long classes) and avoid run-on sentences.

示例: I usually feel tired at the weekend because I attend long classes at an academy every day during the week. The academy is far from my home, so the long commute and study hours make me exhausted by Saturday.

建议: Answer directly and give a brief explanation of benefits; use correct tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement ("I sleep/rest") then explain why and how it helps with one or two specific effects. Keep it to two or three sentences.

示例: I usually sleep or take a short nap when I feel tired because it reduces my stress and helps me recover energy. For instance, a 30-minute nap after studying makes me more focused for the rest of the day.

× No, I didn't feel tired in my daily routine because I go for preparing my eyes exam exam and when I came back to my home and I do different activities

✓ No, I don't feel tired in my daily routine because I prepare for my eye exams, and when I come back home I do different activities

The student used past tense 'didn't feel' inconsistently with habitual present context; change to present simple 'don't feel'. 'Go for preparing' is unnatural; use 'prepare for'. 'Eyes exam exam' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'eye exams'. 'Came back to my home' should be present habitual 'come back home'. Overall use present simple for routines and fix word choice and word order.

× I feel tired on weekend because nor day I am preparing my arts exam so I go to the academy on daily basis and the academy is long distance from my home so that

✓ I feel tired on weekends because every day I am preparing for my arts exam, so I go to the academy daily and the academy is far from my home

Use plural 'weekends' for habitual occurrences. 'Nor day' is incorrect; likely 'every day'. Use 'preparing for' with exams. 'On daily basis' should be 'daily' or 'on a daily basis'. 'Long distance from my home' is awkward; use 'far from my home'. Maintain present continuous 'am preparing' for ongoing preparation.

× I do sleep when I feel tired because it helped me to reduce my stress and improve my daily routine because I already mentioned already in preparing IT exam. So every week I am tired.

✓ I sleep when I feel tired because it helps me reduce my stress and improve my daily routine, as I mentioned already while preparing for my IT exam. So every week I feel tired

'I do sleep' is unnecessary emphatic; use 'I sleep'. 'Helped me' is past tense; use present 'helps' to match habitual action. 'To reduce my stress' can be 'reduce my stress'. 'Already mentioned already in preparing IT exam' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'as I mentioned already while preparing for my IT exam'. End sentence 'So every week I am tired' should be 'I feel tired' to match natural collocation.