礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接提到了父母的教育，但“pleased”用词错误，应改为“polite”。“be polite to everyone”是正确搭配。建议补充一个具体例子，例如父母教你说“please”和“thank you”，这样内容会更完整、更自然。

示例: When I was a child, my parents taught me to be polite to everyone. They often reminded me to say “please” when asking for something and “thank you” when receiving it. They also encouraged me to greet adults respectfully.

建议: 回答有清晰的观点和原因，结构基本完整。需要改进语法和搭配：“meet someone for the first time”中要加“for the”；“make a positive impression for you”不自然，应改为“form a positive impression of you”或“you will leave a positive impression on them”。

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important. If you are polite when meeting someone for the first time, you will usually leave a positive impression on them. It can also help people feel more comfortable and build a good relationship.

建议: 主要问题是核心表达错误：“be placed”不能表示“保持礼貌”，应使用“be polite”。“formal situations”后应加逗号或使用连接词，并列举场合时应使用平行结构，例如“when speaking to teachers or attending interviews”。建议给出清晰的主题句和两个具体场合。

示例: I think we should be polite in formal situations, such as when speaking to teachers or attending a job interview. We should also be respectful when meeting older people or talking to someone for the first time. Being polite shows that we value other people.

建议: 回答内容具体，并提供了两个有代表性的礼貌行为，符合题目要求。建议在“When I was a child”后加逗号，并在两个完整句子之间使用连接词或句号，例如“Moreover”或“I also”。这样可以增强句子边界和逻辑连贯性。

示例: When I was a child, I would take something with both hands if someone gave it to me, because this was a way of showing respect. I would also say “thank you” politely. In my family, these small gestures were considered very important.

× When I was a child my parents told me that I needed to be pleased to everyone.

✓ When I was a child, my parents told me that I needed to be polite to everyone.

“Pleased”表示“感到高兴的”，不能表达“对别人有礼貌”。这里应使用形容词“polite”。建议区分“pleased”（高兴的）和“polite”（有礼貌的）的含义。

× If you are polite when you meet someone first time, they will usually make a positive impression for you.

✓ If you are polite when you meet someone for the first time, they will usually make a positive impression for you.

固定表达是“for the first time”，表示“第一次”。“first time”前通常需要定冠词“the”，并且该短语前需要介词“for”。

× If you are polite when you meet someone first time, they will usually make a positive impression for you.

✓ If you are polite when you meet someone for the first time, they will usually make a positive impression on you.

“make a positive impression on someone”是固定搭配，表示“给某人留下好印象”。因此应使用介词“on”，而不是“for”。

× I think we should be placed in formal situations for example when speaking with teachers during interviews and so on.

✓ I think we should be polite in formal situations, for example, when speaking with teachers during interviews and so on.

“Placed”表示“被放置”，不符合句意。这里要表达“在正式场合保持礼貌”，所以应使用形容词“polite”。表示场合时，“polite in formal situations”更自然。

× When I was a child if someone gave me something I would take it with both hands to show respect I would also say thank you.

✓ When I was a child, if someone gave me something, I would take it with both hands to show respect. I would also say thank you.

原句包含两个完整句子，中间没有标点分隔，造成句子连接错误。条件或时间从句后应加逗号；“I would also say thank you”应另起一句，或用连词连接。