礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答案基本回应了问题，但“there were cereals”表达不清，可能想说“there were several ways”。语法错误较多，如“helped them washing”应改为“helped them wash”，“I always be quiet”应改为“I was always quiet”。另外，“public public area”重复，且缺少清晰的总结句。建议先直接说明主要来源（家庭教育），再用家务和公共场合的行为举例，并使用“also”和“while”连接细节。

示例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. At home, they taught me to help with chores, such as washing the dishes and making my bed. They also reminded me to speak quietly and behave appropriately in public. As a result, I gradually developed good manners.

建议: 答案观点明确，也提到了学校和职场中的重要性，但句子过长，语法和搭配问题影响清晰度。“if you be polite”应改为“if you are polite”，“easy to get along with”后面不应加“where is”。“good at study”应改为“good at studying”或“work well”。建议使用两到三句表达因果关系，并补充一个具体结果，例如更容易建立信任或合作。

示例: Yes, being polite is very important. In the workplace or at school, polite people are usually easier to get along with, so others are more willing to trust and cooperate with them. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can create a friendly atmosphere.

建议: 答案列举了感谢他人和回应道歉两个场合，内容方向正确，但表达不够清楚。“in the public service especially a school”搭配不自然，应具体说“at school or in public places”。“when some sing worries”意思不明确，可能想表达“when someone worries”或“when someone apologizes”。建议使用“for example”和“also”分开列举，并准确说明不同场合应使用的礼貌表达。

示例: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people. For example, at school or in public places, we should say “thank you” when someone helps us. Also, if someone apologizes for a mistake, we can say “That’s all right” or “Never mind” to respond politely.

建议: 答案提供了拜访亲戚时打招呼的具体例子，这是积极的一点，但“didn't know purples”不符合语境，可能想说“didn't know many ways”。“I always say hello”应改为过去时“I always said hello”，“my maybe my uncle”表达不完整。建议直接说明礼貌行为，并解释这种行为给亲戚带来的感受，避免重复“at home”和“came to my home”。

示例: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting my relatives when they visited our home. I always said hello to my uncles and aunts and offered them a seat. This small gesture made them feel welcome and respected.

× At home I always helped my parents with some basic housework like I always helped them washing some dishes or making the bed.

✓ At home, I always helped my parents with some basic housework, such as washing the dishes and making the bed.

help后面可以接动词原形或to do，不能接“help someone doing”来表达这里的意思。应使用“helped them wash”或直接说“helped with washing”。

× But in the public public area, I always I always be quiet.

✓ But in public areas, I was always quiet.

问题询问的是你小时候的经历，所以应使用过去时。be的过去式是was；同时删除重复的“public”和“I always”。

× If you be polite, the other people will think you are very easy to get along with.

✓ If you are polite, other people will think you are easy to get along with.

在含有if的真实条件句中，if从句通常使用一般现在时。主语是you，所以be动词应使用are，而不是be。

× Other people will think you are very easy to get along where is.

✓ Other people will think you are easy to get along with.

短语“get along with someone”表示“与某人相处融洽”，其中介词必须使用with。“where is”在这里没有语法作用，应删除。

× You are also good at study or work.

✓ You are also good at studying or working.

介词at后面如果接动词，应使用动名词形式。因此study和work应分别改为studying和working。

× There are several situations, for example in the public service, especially a school.

✓ There are several situations, for example, in public places, especially at school.

表示“在学校”这一活动场所时，通常使用介词at，即“at school”。“in the public service”不适合表达公共场所，使用“in public places”更准确。

× You can say never mind to show polite.

✓ You can say “never mind” to show politeness.

polite是形容词，不能直接放在show后面作宾语。这里需要使用名词politeness，表示“礼貌”。也可以说“to be polite”。

× When my relatives came to my home, I always say hello to my uncle, so maybe they feel very warm in their heart.

✓ When my relatives came to my home, I always said hello to my uncle, so they probably felt warm inside.

整句话描述的是小时候的经历，因此say应改为过去式said，feel应改为过去式felt。表示过去的推测时，probably比maybe更自然。

× I always say hello my uncle.

✓ I always said hello to my uncle.

固定搭配是“say hello to someone”，表示“向某人问好”，所以hello后面必须使用介词to。由于语境是过去经历，say还应改为said。

× They feel very warm in their heart.

✓ They felt very warm in their hearts.

主语they指多个人，所以表示每个人的心时应使用复数hearts。同时，因为描述的是过去的感受，feel应改为felt。