礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接提到了父母的影响，内容方向正确，但存在较多语法、词汇和表达问题，影响理解。例如，“learned to be a polite man for my parents”应改为“learned to be polite from my parents”；“They are all showed me”应改为“They showed me”；“tactice”不是合适的英语词汇。建议使用“父母教导+具体做法+个人例子”的结构，并确保时态一致。

示例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They often reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they showed me good manners by helping other people. For example, my mother taught me to greet guests politely when they visited our home.

建议: 回答有明确观点，也尝试说明原因和举例，但多个词语使用错误，导致句意不清。“make communication leaders”应表达为“make communication easier”，“shows repairs to others”可改为“shows respect to others”，“at the work”应为“at work”。建议用简单、准确的因果链：礼貌很重要→有助于沟通并表示尊重→工作中的具体例子→结果。

示例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it makes communication easier and shows respect for other people. For example, I always say “please” and “thank you” at work. As a result, my colleagues are usually more willing to help me, and small problems can be solved more quickly.

建议: 回答提到了社交场合、公共场所和初次见面，相关性较好，但句子不完整，且“social platic”“from situation”“should be apply polite”等表达不准确。建议先列出场合，再用一个完整例子展开；同时注意主谓一致，例如“politeness helps”。不要在句末突然中断。

示例: We should be polite in most social situations, especially when meeting someone for the first time or speaking in public places. For example, when I meet a new colleague, I greet them politely and listen carefully. This shows respect and helps create a good first impression.

建议: 回答使用了过去经历和例子，基本回应了问题，但语法错误较多。“my parents taught me to be polite”是正确表达；过去习惯应使用“used to say”或一般过去时；“after she cooked”后应接“for the meal”，而“Excuse me”需要放在请求前。建议选择两个清晰、具体的礼貌行为，不要把多个不完整句子连接在一起。

示例: When I was a child, I used to say “please,” “thank you,” and “excuse me” regularly because my parents taught me good manners. For example, I thanked my mother after she cooked a meal for me. I also said “excuse me” before asking someone to move so that I could pass.

× Well, I learned to be a polite man for my parents.

✓ Well, I learned to be a polite person from my parents.

表示“从父母那里学到”时，应使用介词“from”，而不是“for”。“for”通常表示“为了”或“给”。

× They also remind me to say please and thank you.

✓ They also reminded me to say please and thank you.

整段是在描述童年经历，应该使用一般过去时，所以“remind”要改为“reminded”。

× They are all showed me good manners by helping others.

✓ They all showed me good manners by helping others.

主语“They”主动做出“show”的动作，不应该使用被动语态“are showed”。这里应使用主动语态的一般过去时“showed”。

× For example, my mother made me a great tactice when they come so I tactice that a lot.

✓ For example, my mother taught me good manners when she came, so I practiced them a lot.

句子的主语是“my mother”，后面应使用单数女性代词“she”，不能使用“they”。指代“good manners”时，应使用复数代词“them”。

× For example, my mother made me a great tactice when they come so I tactice that a lot.

✓ For example, my mother taught me good manners when she came, so I practiced them a lot.

这句话描述过去的童年经历，因此“come”应改为过去式“came”，“practice”也应使用过去式“practiced”。

× Well, I think being polite is very important because I make communication leaders and shows repairs to others.

✓ Well, I think being polite is very important because it makes communication easier and shows respect to others.

主语“being polite”或代词“it”是第三人称单数，所以动词应使用“makes”和“shows”。同时，两个并列动词应保持形式一致。

× For example, I always say please and thank you at the work.

✓ For example, I always say please and thank you at work.

“at work”是固定表达，表示“在工作时”或“在工作场所”，通常不在“work”前使用冠词“the”。

× And people usually respond cleanly freshly.

✓ And people usually respond positively.

“cleanly”和“freshly”不能准确表达“积极地回应”的意思。这里应使用副词“positively”修饰动词“respond”。

× So problems are very sover faster.

✓ So problems are solved much faster.

被动结构“are + 过去分词”要求使用过去分词，因此“solve”应为“solved”。“much faster”比“very faster”更符合比较级的用法。

× Well, I think people should be polite in social platic and public and from situation.

✓ Well, I think people should be polite in social situations and in public places.

表示场合时应使用“in”，如“in social situations”和“in public places”。“from situation”不能表达“在某些场合”。

× When you meet someone for the first time you should be apply polite.

✓ When you meet someone for the first time, you should be polite.

情态动词“should”后面应接动词原形。如果使用系动词“be”，后面直接接形容词“polite”，不能使用“be apply”。

× When you meet someone for the first time you should be apply polite because it shows respect and in public place and politeness help.

✓ When you meet someone for the first time, you should be polite because it shows respect. You should also be polite in a public place, because politeness helps others feel respected.

可数名词单数“public place”前需要冠词，应改为“a public place”。此外，原句连接过多，拆成两个句子后结构更清楚。

× When you meet someone for the first time you should be apply polite because it shows respect and in public place and politeness help.

✓ When you meet someone for the first time, you should be polite because it shows respect. You should also be polite in a public place, because politeness helps others feel respected.

主语“politeness”是不可数名词，属于第三人称单数，所以动词“help”应改为“helps”。

× Well, when I was a child I used to say please and thank you all the time because my parents that touched that me that plight.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I used to say please and thank you all the time because my parents taught me to be polite.

原句包含多个多余的“that”，导致句子结构混乱。正确结构是“teach somebody to do something”，因此应说“taught me to be polite”。

× For example, I always say thank you and to my mother after she cooked and I won't say Excuse me I wanted play past some.

✓ For example, I always said thank you to my mother after she cooked, and I would say “Excuse me” when I wanted to play past someone.

整段是在描述童年时的习惯，因此“won’t”不适合表示过去的习惯。应使用“would say”。在过去语境中，“always say”也应改为“always said”。

× For example, I always say thank you and to my mother after she cooked and I won't say Excuse me I wanted play past some.

✓ For example, I always said thank you to my mother after she cooked, and I would say “Excuse me” when I wanted to play past someone.

“say thank you and to my mother”结构不完整，应改为“say thank you to my mother”。此外，“Excuse me”前后需要适当的标点和连接词，使句子结构完整。