礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear, relevant, and well supported with a specific example. However, use the past tense consistently because you are describing childhood: say “We learned” instead of “We’ve learned.” Also, add commas in the expressions “please” and “thank you,” and avoid slightly unnatural wording such as “grew up learning respect”; “learned to respect others” is more natural.

示例: I learned to be polite mainly at primary school. Our teachers regularly reminded us to say “please” and “thank you,” especially during assemblies and when we met guests. My parents also encouraged me to greet people respectfully, so I gradually learned to respect others.

建议: This is a strong, direct answer with a logical reason and a relevant workplace example. The linking between ideas is effective, and the length is appropriate. To make it even more natural, replace “behave courteously first” with “treat them courteously” or “be courteous to them,” since the current phrase sounds slightly formal and less conversational.

示例: Yes, I think being polite is essential because it shows respect and helps build positive relationships. For instance, colleagues are usually more willing to help someone who speaks courteously and appreciates their support. In return, that person is likely to receive the same level of respect.

建议: You give the correct general idea, but the second sentence is difficult to understand because of repeated words and unnatural grammar. Avoid saying “keep their politeness” and “notice keeping polite”; use “be polite” or “show politeness.” Answer the question more directly by naming specific occasions, such as formal events, workplaces, or conversations with older people, and connect them with a clear example.

示例: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, but it is especially important in formal situations. For example, we should use respectful language at work, when meeting guests, or when speaking to older people. Being polite in these situations helps us make a good impression and avoid misunderstandings.

建议: Your answer is relevant and includes a clear reason and result. However, “those small faces” is incorrect; you probably mean “those small phrases” or “those simple words.” Add quotation marks and commas around “thank you,” “you’re welcome,” and “sorry,” and use “maintain good relationships” instead of “keep good relationships” for more natural phrasing. Also, “I would always say” sounds slightly more natural when describing a repeated childhood habit.

示例: When I was a child, I would always say “please,” “thank you,” “you’re welcome,” and “sorry” to show respect. My parents taught me that these simple phrases were important because they helped me maintain good relationships with my neighbours and friends. I also greeted adults politely whenever they visited our home.

× We've learned manners since primary school.

✓ We learned manners in primary school.

The question asks about how you learned to be polite as a child, so the simple past is more appropriate for describing a completed period in the past. Use learned rather than the present perfect have learned in this context.

× Our teachers often reminded us to behave well, for example, by saying please thank you during assemblies and when meeting guests, so we grew up learning respect for others.

✓ Our teachers often reminded us to behave well, for example, by saying please and thank you during assemblies and when meeting guests, so we grew up learning respect for others.

The conjunction and is needed to connect the two expressions please and thank you. When listing two items, use and before the final item.

× Basically, people should always keep their politeness to others whenever and wherever they are.

✓ Basically, people should always show politeness toward others whenever and wherever they are.

The preposition toward is more appropriate when describing behavior directed at other people. Also, show politeness is the natural expression in English; keep their politeness is not used in this meaning.

× However important important occasions they especially have to notice keeping polite to others.

✓ However, on especially important occasions, they should be particularly careful to be polite to others.

The original sentence has a repeated word, an incorrect word order, and an unnatural verb structure. Use the phrase on especially important occasions, place the adverb particularly before the adjective careful, and use be polite after careful to.

× When I was a child, I always said thank you, you're welcome and sorry to others to show my politeness.

✓ When I was a child, I always said thank you, you're welcome, and sorry to others to show my politeness.

The expressions thank you, you're welcome, and sorry are the exact words spoken, so they should be clearly separated as items in a direct speech list. A comma is needed before and to separate the final item in the list.