礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接说明是从母亲那里学到的，然后解释母亲如何教育你。注意时态：用“I learned”而不是“I am”；指代母亲用“she”而不是“he”；“provide to everyone”不符合语境，应改为“be polite to everyone”。列举家人时可以使用“such as”，并补充一个具体行为，避免“and another one”及“every single”等不完整表达。

示例: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother. She always reminded me to respect everyone, including my siblings, relatives, and teachers. For example, she taught me to greet people properly and say “please” and “thank you.”

建议: 观点是明确的，但需要使用正确词汇和完整句子。“plot”“play”和“palied”应改为“politeness”“be polite”和“be polite”。不要说“be polite to everything”，因为通常是对人有礼貌。可以用“because”说明原因，再用“for example”举例，并确保答案完整结束。

示例: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps people communicate more comfortably. For example, I should speak respectfully to my boss and listen carefully to my colleagues at work.

建议: 答案没有清楚回答“哪些场合”，而且多个词语难以理解。可以列出具体场合，例如在课堂上、工作中、与陌生人交谈时或参加正式活动时。使用“especially when”或“for example”连接细节，并注意介词和搭配，如“in class”和“when talking to people”。

示例: We should be polite in almost every social situation, especially in class, at work, and when talking to strangers. For example, we should wait for our turn to speak and avoid interrupting other people. This is particularly important in formal situations.

建议: 可以先说明具体行为，再解释家人的反应。由于问题使用过去时，应将“When I get”改为“When I had dinner”或“When I had dinner with my family”；“pleas”应改为“please”。“say hello and please for everything”不自然，可以说“greet everyone and say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’”。避免重复“happy happy”，改用“they were pleased”。

示例: When I had dinner with my family, I greeted everyone and used polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” I also waited until everyone had been served before I started eating. My family appreciated these good manners.

× I am polite from my mother because he always tells me...

✓ I learned to be polite from my mother because she always told me, “You have to be polite to everyone.”

问题对应过去发生的童年经历，而不是现在的状态，所以应使用过去时 learned 和 told。回答过去时问题时，要注意主要动词保持过去时。

× I am polite from my mother...

✓ I learned to be polite from my mother.

表示“向某人学习”时，可以使用 learn ... from someone。这里 from 用来表示学习的来源。

× because he always tells me

✓ because she always told me

mother 是女性名词，因此应使用女性代词 she，不能使用 he。代词必须与它所指代的名词在人称和性别上保持一致。

× So I must provide to everyone and every single.

✓ So I must be polite to everyone and every single person.

原句中的 provide 不能表达“对别人有礼貌”的意思，而且 every single 后面缺少名词，句子结构不完整。表达完整意思时，应使用 be polite to everyone 或 every single person。

× I have palied to my boss too.

✓ I have to be polite to my boss too.

表达“必须”时，应使用 have to + 动词原形，因此应说 have to be polite。have to 后不能接错误形式的 palied。

× I have to be polite to everyone and everything.

✓ I have to be polite to everyone, including my boss.

be polite 通常与介词 to 搭配，但 everyone 指人，everything 指事物。这里谈论对人的礼貌，因此使用 everyone 或 my boss 更准确。

× So if I work for my boss, I have palied to my boss too and

✓ For example, if I work for my boss, I have to be polite to my boss too.

原句以 and 结尾，句子没有完成，属于结构不完整。应补充完整的主句，并避免在没有后续内容时使用 and。

× We must be polite and class and walk and everybody talking.

✓ We must be polite in class, at work, and when talking to everybody.

表示“在课堂上”使用 in class，表示“在工作场所”使用 at work。表示“和别人交谈时”可以使用 when talking to somebody。不同场合需要搭配正确的介词。

× We must be polite and class and walk and everybody talking.

✓ We must be polite in class, at work, and when talking to everybody.

原句中的 and 连接了不完整或形式不一致的成分，导致句子结构混乱。列举场合时，应使用平行结构：in class, at work, and when talking to everybody。

× When I get a dinner with my family, I must say hello... and they are happy happy.

✓ When I had dinner with my family, I said hello and said please, and they were very happy.

问题询问的是童年时的经历，因此应使用过去时：had、said 和 were。过去发生的动作和当时的状态通常都要使用过去时。

× When I get a dinner with my family

✓ When I had dinner with my family

表示“吃晚饭”这一日常活动时，通常说 have dinner，而不是 have a dinner。三餐名称在这种用法中一般不需要冠词。