礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰且语法错误较多。先直接回答问题（例如：我从父母那里学到的），然后给出具体细节或例子。注意时态和主谓一致，避免不相关或模糊的词语（如“Must be a politician”）。可以用连接词补充说明比如“because”或“for example”。

示例: I learned to be polite from my parents. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they set an example by speaking respectfully to others.

建议: 回答过于含糊且语言混乱。应直接表明观点（重要或不重要），然后给出具体原因或结果。注意时态一致，用简单清晰的句子表达观点，避免不相关的短语。可以使用because, so, therefore等连接词。

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, polite behaviour can make conversations smoother and reduce conflicts.

建议: 回答不够结构化且代词使用错误。先列出具体场合（如公共交通、工作或家庭聚会），然后用连接词扩展说明为什么在这些场合需要礼貌。注意人称代词的一致性与指代明确。

示例: We should be polite in public places like on the bus, at work, and during family gatherings. For instance, saying “excuse me” on a crowded bus shows consideration for others.

建议: 句子不完整且含义不明。应使用过去时描述过去的行为，先给出一个主题句（例如：我会为老人让座），然後补充具体例子或频率。避免重复并确保句子完整。

示例: As a child, I would give up my seat to older people on the bus. I also learned to say “please” and “thank you” and to help my elders with small tasks.

× Yes, my parents teach me. Must be a politician.

✓ Yes, my parents taught me. I must have been taught to be polite, like a politician.

错误类型：现在时/过去时使用不当（应使用过去式）。原句中学生在谈论童年经历，应使用过去时态。第一句“teach”应改为过去式“taught”。第二句断裂且时态与语义不匹配，改为“must have been taught”更符合推测过去原因，或更自然表达为“我应该是像政治家那样被教导要礼貌”。建议：描述过去经历时使用过去时；表达对过去的推测使用“must have + 过去分词”。

× Yes, I thought protest man is more gently.

✓ Yes, I thought a protester was gentler.

错误类型：过去时与现在时混用、名词和形容词形式不当。原句中“thought”为过去时，后半句应保持过去时一致；“protest man”不是常用说法，应为“protester”；“gently”是副词，应使用形容词“gentler”。建议：主句若为过去时，从句也用过去时；注意名词和形容词/副词的正确形式。

× I thought in the bus and talk with others she'll be polite.

✓ I thought that on the bus and when talking with others she would be polite.

错误类型：介词和从句连接使用不当、时态不一致。应使用介词“on the bus”而不是“in the bus”；“talk with others”需改为动名词结构“when talking with others”或引导从句；代词时态“she'll”与前面的“thought”不一致，改为过去将来“she would”。建议：固定搭配“on the bus”；保持时态一致；使用连词或从句使句子完整。

× I will give my give my sales for older people and.

✓ I gave my seat to older people.

错误类型：时态和句子结构不当及重复词。学生在回答童年行为，应使用过去时“gave”；原句中“give my give my sales”存在重复和拼写错误，应该是“give my seat”。句尾的“and”造成句子未完成。建议：用完整的过去时句子，检查重复词并确保句子完整。