礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 句子总体表达清楚且内容具体，但存在少量词汇与语法错误（如“bowling slightly”应为“bowing slightly”）、冗余与重复。回答有多个例子，超过五句的长度限制并可更简洁。建议修正词汇错误，精简句子，使用连接词使结构更连贯，例如先给出主题句，再用1-2个具体例子支持。

示例: My parents taught me politeness from a young age. For example, they told me to greet people when entering a room and to show respect to elders by giving up my seat or bowing slightly. They also taught me table manners, such as waiting for older family members to start eating before I begin.

建议: 回答清晰、结构合理且有具体例子，词汇使用恰当。但可以更简洁并加入连接词如“therefore”或“as a result”使因果关系更明确。长度可保持在3句以内以更自然。

示例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it creates a positive impression. For example, a former colleague’s respectful behaviour in meetings helped him build rapport with a senior manager, and as a result he received a job recommendation.

建议: 回答覆盖面好，给出理由並使用了连接词，但有些重复（例如两次提到礼貌带来好印象）。建议开头用主题句，随后用两句分别展开不同场景的具体原因，并用更丰富的词汇替换“nice/comfortable”。

示例: We should be polite in formal settings like job interviews and meetings, and also when we meet elders or strangers. In interviews, politeness creates a professional impression and can open future opportunities. When meeting elders or strangers, politeness shows respect and helps put them at ease.

建议: 回答有良好意图但存在明显语法与拼写错误（如“politen”应为“polite”；“say thank you all sorry”不通顺，时态混用）。句子冗长且重复同一观点。建议修正拼写与语法，使用一至两句具体例子并注意动词时态一致和连贯连接词。

示例: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people and saying "thank you" and "sorry" when appropriate. For instance, I always took the initiative to say hello to adults, and I would apologise if I made a mistake.

× For instance, they always told me to take the initiative to greet others when I entered a room and show respect to older people by giving up my seats or bowling slightly.

✓ For instance, they always told me to take the initiative to greet others when I entered a room and show respect to older people by giving up my seat or bowing slightly.

句中 "bowling slightly" 拼写错误且用词不当，应为 "bowing slightly"（动词-ing形式）表示轻微鞠躬；另外 "my seats" 与语境不符，应为单数 "my seat"（父母教一个孩子让座通常指让自己的座位）。需要注意动名词/现在分词形式的正确拼写和主语对应的单复数。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important when we communicate with other people, because politeness can leave a positive impression on others.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important when we communicate with other people, because politeness leaves a positive impression on others.

此处表达的是一般真理或普遍事实，谓语动词应使用一般现在时（leaves），而不是情态或可能性的表述（can leave）以更直接地陈述事实。建议在表达普遍事实时使用一般现在时。

× For example, a former colleague of mine was very polite and respectful in meetings, which helped him build a good relationship with a senior manager who later recommended him for a job.

✓ For example, a former colleague of mine was very polite and respectful in meetings, which helped him build a good relationship with a senior manager who later recommended him for a job.

此句时态使用正确（过去时），无需修改。保留原句。

× Firstly, being polite during a job interview can leave a good impression on the interviewer and may even create opportunities for us in the future.

✓ Firstly, being polite during a job interview can leave a good impression on the interviewer and may even create opportunities for us in the future.

此句语法正确，过去分词相关项不适用，保留原句。

× When I was a child I showed my politen by greeting others and say thank you all sorry frequently.

✓ When I was a child I showed my politeness by greeting others and saying "thank you" and "sorry" frequently.

句中多处问题：1) "politen" 拼写错误，应为名词 "politeness"；2) 两个并列动作需统一形式，动词需用动名词形式 "greeting" 和 "saying"；3) 表达感谢和道歉时应用引号或并列结构，且原句中遗漏连词和标点。建议注意拼写和并列动词的一致性。

× For example, I usually take the initiative to greet people when I met them which was a simple way to show respect.

✓ For example, I usually took the initiative to greet people when I met them, which was a simple way to show respect.

句中时间框架不一致：句首用 "usually" 与过去时背景（谈童年）应使用过去时 "took"；从句 "when I met them" 已为过去，主句也应对应过去时；此外在引导非限制性定语从句前应加逗号。建议确保叙述过去经历时主句和从句时态一致。

× Besides, I always remember to say thank you when someone helped me and apologize when I made a mistake.

✓ Besides, I always remembered to say thank you when someone helped me and apologized when I made a mistake.

句子在描述过去的习惯（童年行为），因此应使用过去时态："always remembered"、"helped"、"apologized"。原句中主句使用现在时而从句用过去时，时态不一致。建议在叙述过去经验时全句使用过去时以保持一致性。