礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接且语法正确，句子不宜过长且要有主语和时态一致。可以用一到两句陈述学习礼貌的具体方式，并加一条简短的补充说明。注意使用连词（例如: when, so）使句子更连贯。

示例: When I was a child, my parents taught me to say "thank you" whenever someone gave me something or did something kind. They often reminded me and praised me when I used polite words.

建议: 回答要更有逻辑性和清晰表达原因。开头先给出直接观点，再用一两句具体理由支持，尽量避免重复和不完整的从句，注意人称和代词用法。

示例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it creates a good first impression. If you speak rudely to someone you don't know well, they may feel offended and be less willing to talk to you.

建议: 回答要先给出场合的总括（例如: public places, formal events）, 然后举一两个具体例子并说明原因。注意词汇准确（public place -> public places; polite -> polite），并用连接词使句子流畅。

示例: We should be polite in public places and formal events, such as on public transport or at work. For example, on a bus it's polite to offer your seat to elderly people so others feel respected.

建议: 回答应更具体，先给出一到两句直接陈述自己采取的行为，再提供一个具体例子或结果。避免填充词（um）并保持句子简洁，使用正确时态和短语（e.g. say thank you, greet people）。

示例: I followed my parents' advice and always said "thank you" when someone gave me something. For example, I would thank teachers when they helped me with homework and neighbors when they shared food.

× When I was little my parents usually tell me that when someone gave you something word tell you something that you need to say thank you for to them

✓ When I was little, my parents usually told me that when someone gives you something or says something to you, you need to say "thank you" to them.

问题类型：5（过去时问题）、6（现在时问题）、26（句子结构错误）和27（主谓一致）。原句时态混用：开头是过去时（When I was little），应与主句保持过去时（told）。句中又出现 gave（过去）和 tell（现在），应统一并用合适的时态和形式：使用 gives（一般现在）表示一般事实。句子结构混乱，缺少连词并且短语顺序不当，导致意思不清。建议将句子分成主句和从句，使用标点分隔，保持时态一致并使用正确的动词形式和介词短语（say "thank you" to someone）。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important. Like if you're talking to someone and you don't know he or she really much and you feel very rude, you talked with them that let them feel you are very rude so they will not like to tell with you.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important. For example, if you're talking to someone you don't know very well and you behave rudely, the other person will feel offended and won't want to talk with you.

问题类型：26（句子结构错误）、12（代词使用错误）、13（形容词/副词使用错误）和11（介词使用错误）。原句代词使用混乱（you don't know he or she really much 应为 you don't know them very well），形容词/副词错误（feel very rude 用法不当，应为 behave rudely 或 feel offended），介词短语错误（talk with you 表达可用 talk to 或 talk with，但上下文用 talk with you 更自然）。建议把复合句理顺为两个句子，使用正确的代词（them）、副词（very well）和动词短语（behave rudely, feel offended）。

× I think in the public place we need to show our polite like because there are a lot of people there in the public place so if you do not show your plight, a lot of people will feel very bad for and rude to you.

✓ I think in public places we need to be polite because there are a lot of people there, so if you are not polite, many people will feel offended and think you're rude.

问题类型：11（介词使用错误）、22（冠词错误）和13（形容词/副词使用错误）。原句中的 in the public place 冗余且用冠词不当，通常说 in public 或 in public places。短语 show our polite / show your plight 用法错误，应说 be polite 或 not be polite。feel very bad for 不合适，建议用 feel offended 或 feel upset。改写时要注意冠词省略或复数形式的使用，并用恰当形容词/动词短语表达情感。

× Um just what my parents told me and I just speak like they told me you need to say thanks to someone when they tell you or give something so I just say thanks to them.

✓ Um, I just did what my parents told me. I say thank you to someone when they give me something or do something for me, so I just say thanks to them.

问题类型：5（过去时问题）、26（句子结构错误）和13（形容词/副词使用错误）。原句时态混用（told（过去）和 speak（现在））且句子冗长不清。把句子拆成两句更清楚：第一句用过去时表述父母的教导（did what my parents told me），第二句用一般现在时表述习惯（I say/ I just say thanks）。同时用正确的搭配 say thank you to someone / give me something。建议简化句子并保持时态一致以提高可理解性。