礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 句子整体意思清楚，但存在语法错误、停顿和重复词（如“meet uh meet”），动词时态和形式不准确（e.g. “is meet”, “step”应为“steps”或“stepped”）。回答可更简洁自然，控制在3-4句内，并用连接词提升流畅度。建议练习正确使用一般现在时描述习惯行为，用少量细节支持观点以显得更自然。

示例: I learned manners from my parents, especially my mother. She always greets people warmly and apologizes if she accidentally steps on someone’s foot. Watching her taught me how to be friendly and considerate in everyday situations.

建议: 回答表达了观点但语法混乱（例如“being always been polite”，句子冗长且重复），信息没有分成清晰的主句和支持句。建议用一到两句话直接给出观点，再用一两句具体原因或例子支持，注意时态和词序。使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑。

示例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it makes people feel comfortable. For example, when I’m polite to others I usually make new friends more easily, and I can learn good habits from them.

建议: 观点明确但存在语法错误（“in every occasions”, “did something wrong”），有多余或不合适的结尾（“OK, thank you at least.”）。建议用更自然的表达分两句说清普遍原则和特殊场合，并举一两个具体情境。注意名词单复数和时态一致。

示例: I think we should be polite on all occasions, especially when we’ve made a mistake. For instance, if you bump into someone you should apologize, and if someone helps you, try to thank them or return the favor.

建议: 回答有重复、犹豫词（umm）、时态混杂（现在时与过去时混用），句子未完成且缺乏具体细节。建议用简洁的过去时或过去习惯表达（e.g. “I used to...”），并补充一两个具体例子（如在学校或家里做了什么）以丰富内容。练习消除填充词，保持句子完整。

示例: As a child, I used to say “thank you” whenever someone helped me and apologise if I hurt someone’s feelings. For example, at school I would share my toys and say sorry if I accidentally broke a classmate’s pencil.

× She always says hello whenever she is meet uh meet a friend and she will apologize if she accidentally step on someone's foot.

✓ She always says hello whenever she meets a friend and she apologizes if she accidentally steps on someone's foot.

句中“is meet”是不正确的进行时结构，应使用一般现在时表示经常性动作；“step”需与第三人称单数主语一致，改为“steps”。建议：遇到经常发生的动作用一般现在时，第三人称单数动词加 -s。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because people like to talk to someone who is being always been polite and having a good manner helps me to get to meet new friends and this is a great way for me to learn more good habits from them.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because people like to talk to someone who is always polite, and having good manners helps me meet new friends; this is a great way for me to learn good habits from them.

原句时态和词序混乱：“who is being always been polite”应改为“who is always polite”或直接“who is always polite”；“having a good manner”用复数“good manners”；“helps me to get to meet”冗余，改为“helps me meet”。建议：简化表达，保持时态一致，注意固定搭配（good manners）。

× I learned to be polite as a child from my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child.

原句中时间状语位置略显不自然，虽不完全错误但更常见的表达是将时间短语置于句末或用从句“when I was a child”。建议：把“as a child”改为“when I was a child”或放在句尾以使语序更自然。

× I think we should be polite in every occasions, especially when we did something wrong.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion, especially when we do something wrong.

“every”后面用单数名词“occasion”而不是复数“occasions”；“did”与上下文一般现在时冲突，表示一般情形应使用一般现在时“do”。建议：记住“every”后用单数，描述一般情况用一般现在时。

× What did you do to show your politeness as a child? ... I do different things umm I always say thank you if someone helps me umm and also I will apologize if if I make any mistakes or offended anyone and I will being I was being polite to my friends umm family and.

✓ When I was a child, I did different things. I always said thank you if someone helped me, and I apologized if I made any mistakes or offended anyone. I tried to be polite to my friends and family.

题目是过去时“did you do”，回答应使用过去时。原句混合现在时、将来时和不完整结构（"I will being I was being"）。需把动词改为过去式：do→did, say→said, help→helped, apologize→apologized, make→made, offend→offended，最后用完整句表达“tried to be polite”。建议：回答关于过去的事情时统一使用过去时，避免混用时态并把句子说完整。