礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng về thời gian và cách thức hơn, dùng thì phù hợp (quá khứ cho việc đã xảy ra), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Thêm một câu hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ cách bố mẹ dạy) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu tự nhiên.

示例: My parents taught me to be polite when I was young. They often reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they demonstrated polite behavior themselves. For example, my mother always encouraged me to greet elders and apologize when I made a mistake.

建议: Câu cần sửa ngữ pháp (sử dụng đúng dạng động từ) và mở rộng ý bằng lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ. Dùng linking words như "because" hoặc "so" hợp lý trong 1–3 câu ngắn gọn.

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you make new friends and build good relationships. For instance, when I greet someone respectfully, they are more likely to respond positively and start a conversation.

建议: Câu trả lời nên tách ý rõ ràng, tránh lỗi lặp và ngữ pháp ("be being" không đúng). Bổ sung thêm một hoặc hai dịp khác và giải thích ngắn gọn lý do bằng linking words như "for example" hoặc "so". Giữ 2–3 câu tự nhiên.

示例: We should be polite at work, when meeting new people, and in formal situations such as interviews or ceremonies. For example, polite behavior at work creates a cooperative atmosphere, so colleagues are more willing to help.

建议: Cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và câu rõ ràng, loại bỏ tiếng ấp úng (uh) và sửa ngữ pháp ("when they needed"; "I also listened carefully"). Thêm minh hoạ cụ thể (một ví dụ hành động) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu.

示例: When I was a child, I helped classmates and teachers when they needed something, such as lending stationery or carrying books. I also listened carefully to my parents and teachers to show respect and learn good manners.

× I will be told by my parents.

✓ I was taught by my parents.

The student used 'will be told' which indicates future passive; the context asks about childhood (past). Use past tense 'was taught' to show past action. Also 'taught' is the correct verb for learning manners rather than 'told'. Suggestion: Use past simple passive for past experiences ('I was taught by my parents').

× My parents usually remind me to say please and thank you.

✓ My parents usually reminded me to say 'please' and 'thank you'.

The question asks about how the student learned as a child, so events should be in the past. Change present simple 'remind' to past simple 'reminded'. Also put spoken words in quotes when written; keep tense consistent with childhood context.

× I think being polite is very important because it make me new friends and start new relationships.

✓ I think being polite is very important because it makes me new friends and helps me start new relationships.

Subject-verb agreement: 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'being polite'. Also add 'helps me' to correctly connect 'start new relationships' and keep verb forms parallel. Use present simple for general truth ('I think...').

× Well, I think we should be polite at work and when meeting new people because be being polite makes people more willing to help you.

✓ Well, I think we should be polite at work and when meeting new people because being polite makes people more willing to help you.

There is an extra 'be' before 'being polite' which is incorrect; remove it. Use 'when meeting new people' (correct). Maintain present participle 'being' to express general cause-effect.

× Well, when I was a child I uh helped my classmate and teacher when they need something and or I some are listening carefully to my parent and teacher.

✓ Well, when I was a child I helped my classmates and teachers when they needed something, and I also listened carefully to my parents and teachers.

Multiple errors: plural forms 'classmate' and 'teacher' should be 'classmates' and 'teachers' for general reference. 'Need' should be past 'needed' to match past context. Remove filler 'uh' and fix word order: 'I also listened carefully' is correct. Use plural 'parents' and consistent past simple tense for past childhood actions.