礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接且语法正确，控制在不超过5句；使用主题句开头，然后用一两句具体细节支持，并用连接词使句子更连贯。注意动词时态和单复数（例如: “told me”, “adults”），以及标点断句。可以举具体场景和例子来丰富内容，比如在家里或在学校父母如何示范。

示例: My parents taught me good manners from a young age. For example, they often reminded me to say “thank you” and “sorry” when appropriate, and they showed me how to greet adults politely. As a result, I learned to be respectful in both family and school situations.

建议: 回答应更简洁、有条理，并提供具体理由或例子。用主题句直接回答，再用一两句解释原因或结果。修正语法和搭配（例如: “people will want to be near you”, 删除多余词汇如“when if”），并用连接词如“because”或“so”保持逻辑性。

示例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build trust and good relationships. When you are polite, people feel respected and are more likely to spend time with you, whereas rudeness can push others away.

× When I was a child, my mom and dad always tell me to be polite to the adult.

✓ When I was a child, my mom and dad always told me to be polite to adults.

错误类型：主谓一致与名词单复数。原句中时态是过去（When I was a child），谓语应使用过去式 told（原句用现在式 tell 不匹配）。另外，'the adult' 应为复数或泛指复数形式 adults 而不是带定冠词的单数。改正建议：将动词改为过去式 told，并把 the adult 改为 adults 表示泛指多个成年人。

× For example, say thank you or sorry when greetings and you say hi yes and when you see other adults you need to say hi to them

✓ For example, say 'thank you' or 'sorry' when greeting, and when you see other adults you should say hi to them.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式与句子结构不当。原句中 'when greetings' 用法错误，正确应为动名词形式 greeting 表示在打招呼时。同时句子结构杂乱，缺少连贯性和礼貌用法建议。还调整了情态动词由 need 改为 should 更加自然。改正建议：使用 'when greeting' 来引导时间状语，使用引号标出固定短语，并用 should 替代 need 表达建议性。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because if you are polite, people will want to be more near to you and when if you are not polite people will leave you and you might still have friends

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because if you are polite, people will want to be closer to you, and if you are not polite, people will avoid you, although you may still have friends.

错误类型：现在时/表达方式与词汇搭配问题。原句中 'want to be more near to you' 搭配不自然，应该使用 closer to you。'when if' 出现重复连词，应去掉一个，且用 if 引导条件句。'leave you' 在语境中可改为 avoid you 更符合意思；最后一句用 might still have friends 改为 may still have friends 更流畅。改正建议：调整搭配为 'closer to you'，删除重复连词，使用更自然的动词 avoid，并用 may 表示可能性。