礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating how you learned politeness, then give one or two specific examples (who taught you and how). Use correct grammar (past tense) and avoid filler words. Link ideas with simple connectors (for example, "for instance", "also"). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

示例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and my teachers when I was a child. For instance, my mother always told me to say "please" and "thank you," and my teacher praised students who waited their turn to speak. Also, in our culture people bow slightly when meeting elders, which taught me to show respect.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with a concise reason and a specific example. Correct grammar (use singular/plural consistently and proper verb forms). Use a linking word like "because" or "for example" to connect reason and example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because we live in a society where good communication matters. For example, polite behavior like listening and using polite expressions helps avoid conflicts and makes daily interactions smoother.

× Hmm very interesting questions.

✓ Hmm, very interesting question.

The speaker uses plural 'questions' but the context implies one question; this is a sentence structure and noun number issue. Use singular 'question' to match the examiner's single prompt and add a comma after interjection 'Hmm' for clarity. Suggestion: pause after 'Hmm' and then say 'very interesting question.'

× I would say I would touch to be polite by my parents and my teachers as a try.

✓ I would say I was taught to be polite by my parents and my teachers as a child.

The original uses incorrect verb 'touch' instead of past participle 'taught' and awkward phrase 'as a try.' The appropriate construction is passive past 'was taught' to show who taught the speaker. Also specify 'as a child' to explain timing. Suggestion: use 'was taught' for passive past and 'taught' (past participle) instead of 'touch.'

× In other cultures they have us umm specifics types of beings polite.

✓ In some other cultures, they teach specific ways of being polite.

The phrase 'have us umm specifics types of beings polite' is ungrammatical. Use 'teach' as the verb, 'specific ways' (noun phrase) rather than 'specifics types,' and 'of being polite' instead of 'of beings polite.' Also add a comma after 'In some other cultures.' Suggestion: say 'they teach specific ways of being polite' to express the idea clearly.

× Absolutely, being polite is one of the normals behaviour that everybody should bear in mind because we living in communities, society where we have to communicate with other people.

✓ Absolutely. Being polite is one of the normal behaviours that everybody should bear in mind because we live in communities and societies where we have to communicate with other people.

Multiple errors: 'normals behaviour' should be 'normal behaviours' (adjective-noun agreement and plural noun), 'we living' lacks the auxiliary verb and should be 'we live' (present tense), and 'communities, society' needs parallel plural nouns joined properly. Also split into two sentences or use a period for clarity. Suggestion: use correct adjective order 'normal behaviours' or 'normal behavior' (American English), and use present simple 'we live.'

× So you're being polite is crucial.

✓ So being polite is crucial.

The phrase 'you're being polite is crucial' mixes a contraction with a noun clause incorrectly. Remove 'you're' and use the gerund clause 'being polite' as the subject. Suggestion: say 'So being polite is crucial' for a grammatically correct statement.