礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., "when I was a child"). Avoid fillers like "yeah" and unclear phrases such as "sound like goes to."

示例: I learned to be polite when I was a child because my parents set a good example. For instance, they always encouraged me to say "please" and "thank you," and they explained why being respectful helps build good relationships.

建议: Give a direct answer then provide one clear reason and a specific example. Fix grammar and coherence: avoid fragmented sentences and repetition. Use a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example") to connect your reason and example.

示例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along and creates a positive atmosphere. For example, when I greet colleagues politely at work, they tend to be more cooperative and helpful, which improves teamwork.

× I learned to be polite when I was child, all because of my parents, who taught me to be kind before, like to everyone.

✓ I learned to be polite when I was a child, all because of my parents, who taught me to be kind to everyone.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' is an article error affecting present reference; this falls under present tense issue because the timeframe and habitual meaning require correct noun phrase. Also, the phrase 'taught me to be kind before, like to everyone' is awkward; 'to be kind to everyone' is correct. Suggestion: include the article 'a' with 'child' and place 'to' directly before 'everyone' to show the object of 'kind'. Note: If classifying strictly by the provided list, this is primarily an article/phrase correction but relates to present-time habitual meaning, so listed as Present tense issue per instruction.

× So yeah, all my politeness, yeah, sound like goes to my parents.

✓ So yeah, all my politeness, yeah, seems to go to my parents.

Original sentence has subject-verb agreement and verb form problems: 'politeness' (singular noun) requires a singular verb; 'sound like goes' mixes idioms and verb forms incorrectly. Use 'seems to go' or 'sounds like it goes' for correct agreement and infinitive form. Suggestion: choose one idiom and match verb number and form ('seems to go' is natural).

× Yes, of course, being polite plays a vital role in your daily lives.

✓ Yes, of course, being polite plays a vital role in your daily life.

Mismatch between singular noun phrase 'your daily life' and plural 'lives' creates awkward reference. The general statement uses second-person singular/plural; 'your daily life' is more natural. This is a present-tense general truth, so classified as Present tense issue. Suggestion: use 'daily life' for a general statement about habits.

× Like you someone like someone who is seeking you, they can learn from you.

✓ For example, if someone admires you or looks up to you, they can learn from you.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: repeated 'like someone like someone who is seeking you' lacks proper clause structure. This is a sentence structure error. Correction clarifies the conditional idea: 'if someone admires you or looks up to you' and matches 'they can learn from you'. Suggestion: use a clear conditional clause and avoid repetition.

× Like she's so kind and helpful, polite.

✓ For example, if she is kind and helpful, she is polite.

Original fragment 'Like she's so kind and helpful, polite.' is a fragmented clause and redundant. This is a sentence structure error. The corrected sentence forms a full clause and removes redundancy. Suggestion: use complete clauses and avoid tacking adjectives without a verb.