礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Speak more clearly and structure your answer: start with a clear topic sentence saying who taught you, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (what your parents/school taught you and an example). Avoid filler sounds (uh, um) and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, also, and) to make your answer coherent. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

示例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and from school. For example, my parents always taught me to say “please” and “thank you,” and my teachers used role-play activities to practice polite conversations. As a result, politeness became a natural habit for me.

建议: Give a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use concise language and correct grammar (e.g., “it is very important in daily life at any age”). Use linking words such as because, therefore, and for example to connect ideas. Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along in daily life. For example, being polite at work or school makes communication smoother and reduces conflicts.

× We, I need to be polite as a child because my parents give me some instructions to be, uh, polite girl.

✓ I needed to be polite as a child because my parents gave me instructions to be a polite girl.

Pronoun and tense errors: 'We, I' is confusing—use a single subject 'I'. The context asks about childhood, so past tense is appropriate: change 'need' to 'needed' and 'give' to 'gave' (Past tense issue - ID 5). Also 'some instructions to be, uh, polite girl' is missing an article before 'polite girl' and is awkward; insert 'a' before 'polite girl' and remove filler. Suggestions: choose one clear subject, use past tense for past events, and include the indefinite article before countable nouns ('a polite girl').

× Umm, but it's a pain.

✓ Umm, but it was difficult.

The phrase 'it's a pain' is colloquial and present tense; in context of childhood, past tense fits better (Past tense issue - ID 5). Also 'a pain' is vague; 'difficult' is clearer. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame and use clearer vocabulary in formal responses.

× The education and then the education in the school that do you usually have.

✓ Both at home and in school, I received that education regularly.

This sentence is ungrammatical and unclear (Sentence structure errors - ID 26). It mixes fragments and an incorrect question structure 'that do you usually have.' The speaker likely means they received polite-manners education both at home and at school. Suggestion: combine ideas into a single clear statement, use past tense 'received', and specify locations 'at home and in school.'

× Yes I do because it implies very important for our daily life depend the age like for every age is really important.

✓ Yes, I do, because it is very important for daily life; it matters at every age.

Multiple tense and structure problems: 'it implies very important' is incorrect verb use and missing copula—use 'it is very important' (Present tense issue - ID 6). 'depend the age like for every age is really important' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it matters at every age' or 'it is important at every age.' Suggestions: use correct verb 'is', avoid literal translations like 'depend the age', and split into clearer clauses with punctuation.

× Umm and it's considered be polite for our life.

✓ Umm, and being polite is considered important for our lives.

Incorrect verb form: 'considered be' is wrong; use 'considered important' or use the gerund 'being polite' as the subject (Verb + -ing form / incorrect verb use - IDs 8 and 9). Also 'for our life' should be plural 'for our lives' to match general meaning (Singular and plural issue - ID 1). Suggestion: use 'being' + noun/adjective construction and pluralize 'life' when speaking generally.