礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 纠正语法和用词错误，减少口头语填充（如 uh），并用更清晰具体的细节说明父母如何教导，比如举例礼貌用语或行为。回答应有主题句并用一到两个支持句补充。

示例: When I was a child, my parents taught me basic manners at home. For example, they told me to say “please” and “thank you,” and to address older people respectfully, like calling a neighbor “Mr. Smith.” They also reminded me to wait my turn to speak, which helped me behave politely in public.

建议: 提高表达的清晰度和准确性，避免多余重复，使用连贯的连接词（e.g. because, so）并给出具体理由或例子来支持观点。注意形容词搭配（e.g. make a good impression, become closer）。

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you make a good impression on others. For instance, using polite language can make people more willing to help you, so relationships often become closer. In the workplace, politeness also creates a more pleasant atmosphere and better cooperation.

× Uh, when I was a children, my parents told me to, uh, call the people with their, uh, wisdom prizely.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, my parents told me to call people respectfully.

错误类型：单复数错误（Singular and plural issue）。原因：children是“孩子”的复数形式，但句中主语“I”需要单数形式 child。其他问题：'call the people with their wisdom prizely' 语义和用词不自然，改为更地道的respectfully。改进建议：遇到表示“我小时候”这样的结构用单数child；用常见搭配如 'call people respectfully' 表达“有礼貌地称呼别人”。

× Such as when I meet some older sister, I just, uh, call them dear.

✓ For example, when I meet an older woman, I just call her 'dear'.

错误类型：形容词/副词和代词使用不当（Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / Incorrect use of pronouns）。原因：'some older sister' 用法不自然；应使用 'an older woman' 或 'an older sister'（指亲属）。代词与单数不匹配，原句用 them 与单数不一致，且称呼 'dear' 需要引号或说明为称呼。改进建议：使用自然的名词短语（an older woman）并保持代词与名词数一致（her）。

× Of course, it is a basic way to live a excellent impression on others and uh, uh, it is very easy to uh, let you and others become more closer.

✓ Of course, it is a basic way to leave an excellent impression on others, and it is very easy to help you and others become closer.

错误类型：句子结构错误（Sentence structure errors）及冠词错误（Article errors）和比较级用法问题。原因：原句 'a basic way to live a excellent impression' 语序和动词选择错误，应为 'leave an impression'；'a excellent' 冠词与形容词发音不匹配应为 'an excellent'；'become more closer' 比较级重复，正确为 'become closer' 或 'more close'（但更常用 closer）。此外 'let you and others become' 用法生硬，改为 'help you and others become' 更自然。改进建议：使用固定搭配 'leave an impression'；注意 'a' 与 'an' 的使用；比较级不要重复使用 'more' 与比较级词尾同时出现。