礼貌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接并且语法正确。首先用一到两句主题句说明是谁教你的，然后给一两条具体例子（例如父母如何教、在什么情境下练习）。注意时态和词汇（例如 say hi → say hello，be true → good manners / polite），控制在不超过五句。可以用连接词如 “for example” 或 “such as” 来组织细节。

示例: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, they always reminded me to say hello to neighbors and to say please and thank you to my classmates. They also taught me to show kindness by sharing and helping others, which became a habit.

建议: 回答要逻辑清晰、用词准确并给出真实具体的例子。先直接回答“Yes”或“No”，然后给两到三个清晰原因或结果，使用连接词（because, for example, therefore）。注意表达否定时的语法（don’t be polite → are impolite），并避免含糊的数字或不明信息。

示例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps you build good relationships and avoid conflicts. For example, if you are rude to restaurant staff, they may be less willing to help you or serve you quickly. Therefore, politeness often leads to better treatment and smoother interactions.

× I learned to be true is all come from my parents because they will say that you need to say hi or be polite with your anyone like with your student, with your student classmate and with your partners. And also we be being kindness, yeah.

✓ I learned to be polite — it all comes from my parents, because they always said that you need to say "hi" and be polite to everyone, like your classmates and partners. Also, we should be kind.

句子结构混乱：原句包含多处短语和从句未正确连接，语序不当，导致意思不清。具体问题包括：动词时态与主语不一致（will say/always said）、冗余或错误词语（"be true"、"your anyone"、"student classmate"）、以及并列连词和从句缺乏标点或连接词。建议：把句子拆成更短的句子或用破折号/逗号清晰连接，确保主句和从句的时态一致，替换错误词汇（如用 "polite" 代替 "be true"，用 "everyone" 代替 "your anyone"），并使用正确的名词（"classmates" 而不是 "student classmate"）。

× I think it is important because if you don't being polite with others, they will get put some difficulties or obstacles on you.

✓ I think it is important because if you don't behave politely toward others, they may cause difficulties or obstacles for you.

现在时/动词形式使用错误：原句中使用了不正确的动词形式 "don't being"（应为否定形式的动词原形或短语），以及短语 "get put some difficulties on you" 语法和搭配错误。建议：在条件句中使用正确的动词形式（"don't behave" 或 "aren't polite"），并用正确的搭配表达造成困难（"cause difficulties for you" 或 "create obstacles for you"）。

× For example, if you go to a restaurant and you don't be impolite with the services, a will put some 30s on your dishes or don't be services or you.

✓ For example, if you go to a restaurant and you are impolite to the staff, they may delay your dishes or provide poor service.

介词和搭配错误：原句中使用了错误的介词和名词搭配（如 "impolite with the services"、"put some 30s on your dishes"、"don't be services or you"），导致无法理解。正确用法是对人使用 "impolite to"，对服务使用 "poor service"，表示延迟应使用 "delay your dishes"。建议：把介词改为正确的搭配（"impolite to the staff"），并用常见表达描述后果（"delay your dishes" 或 "provide poor service"）。