纸— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“当然做过”，再补充一两个具体例子和学习来源。注意用“paper crafts”而不是“paper crops”；“relaxed”通常形容人的感受，这里可用“relaxing”。建议将答案控制在两三句，并修正过去时和表达。

示例: Yes, of course. I loved making paper crafts when I was a little girl, especially paper airplanes and picture frames. I learned how to make them from a TV show, and I found it really relaxing.

建议: 回答内容切题，但“like every girl”过于笼统，也不必用性别概括。请用过去时“liked”，并明确说明你会画画、做手工或制作贺卡；“do some make crafts and cars”表达不清，可改为“make crafts and cards”。

示例: As a child, I liked drawing and making simple crafts with paper. I sometimes made cards for my friends’ birthdays or for festivals. It was a fun way to make a small, personal gift.

建议: 请先明确回答“偶尔会写”，再补充具体场合和原因。“physical actors”应为“physical letters”或“handwritten letters”；“like my family or my friend's birthday”可改为“for my family members’ or friends’ birthdays”。避免句末不完整的“celebrated”。

示例: Yes, occasionally. Although handwritten letters are less common now, I sometimes write one for a family member or a friend on their birthday. It feels more personal than sending a quick text.

建议: 先直接回答问题，再说明人们为什么会保留或不保留信件。当前答案中的“Highwright”“fax fax development”等表达难以理解；可使用“handwrite letters”“the internet”和“type messages”。注意逻辑：虽然现在较少手写信，但有纪念意义的信仍可能被保存。

示例: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they are from someone important to them. Although most people now send messages online, a handwritten letter can feel more personal and bring back special memories.

建议: 答案没有清楚回应是否随身携带纸笔。请用“Yes, I do”或“No, I don’t”开头，再说明携带的物品和用途。可以说“a notebook and a pen”“write down my daily to-do list”和“plan my day”；避免重复使用“because”。

示例: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out. I use them to write down tasks or reminders because I like to plan my day. They are also useful when I need to note something quickly.

× I still remember it was so relaxed.

✓ I still remember it was so relaxing.

“Relaxed”通常描述人的感受；这里的“it”指电视节目，应使用“relaxing”，表示节目让人感到放松。

× I like to draw on the paper

✓ I liked to draw on the paper

问题问的是小时候喜欢做什么，因此应使用一般过去时“liked”，而不是一般现在时“like”。回答过去的经历时，要注意让动词时态与过去时间保持一致。

× do some make crafts

✓ make some crafts

“do some make crafts”中同时使用了“do”和“make”，结构不正确。表达“制作一些手工艺品”时，直接说“make some crafts”即可。

× I will write physical letters celebrated.

✓ I will write physical letters to celebrate the occasion.

“letters celebrated”把名词“letters”和过去分词“celebrated”直接连接，句子结构不成立。这里要表达写信的目的，应使用“to + 动词原形”，即“to celebrate”。