纸— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，但“photo cutting”应改为更准确的“paper cutting”，“aircraft”应改为“craft”或“art form”。注意时态一致：过去经历用“used to like”，不要用现在时“I really like it”。最后一句“it was interesting”较笼统，可以补充具体原因，例如剪出复杂图案或把作品送给家人。

示例: Yes, I have. When I was very young, I used to make Chinese paper cuttings, which are a traditional folk craft. I enjoyed cutting out flowers and animals because the process was creative and relaxing.

建议: 主要问题是时态和语法：过去经历应使用“I liked”，应说“small crafts, such as animals and books”，而不是“a small animals”。句子“I like to draw on paper when I was”不完整，需要改为“When I was a child, I also liked drawing on paper”。可使用“Besides”连接两个活动，并补充一个具体细节。

示例: When I was a child, I liked folding paper to make small crafts, such as animals and little books. Besides, I often drew pictures on paper, especially cartoon characters, because it was a simple and enjoyable way to be creative.

建议: 观点清楚，但“thankless”应改为“thanks”或“gratitude”，“in”结尾不完整，应删除或补充时间。避免重复使用“physical letters”，可以用“handwritten letters”。建议使用过去时讲述具体经历，并说明这封信表达了什么感谢。

示例: Yes, occasionally. I think handwritten letters are a meaningful way to express my feelings. For example, I wrote one to my high-school Chinese teacher to express my gratitude for her support and encouragement.

建议: 回答有例子，但存在明显语法问题：“one of my friend”应为“one of my friends”，“likes”后面的主语是she，所以“posts”，“on the Internet”前需要定冠词。根据语境，“exchange letters with friends”比“change different letters”准确。建议先概括观点，再用朋友的例子支持，并说明保存信件的原因。

示例: Yes, I think some people still do. One of my friends keeps handwritten letters from people around the world. She often posts online to find pen pals and exchanges letters with them because she enjoys having a personal record of those friendships.

建议: 回答观点明确，且给出了原因和替代方式，但应保持现在时：用“is”而不是“was”。“When I'm in outside”应改为“When I’m out”，“paper and pen”通常用复数“paper and pens”。“I hold the opinion that”不够自然，可直接说“I don’t find it convenient”。

示例: Not really. I don’t find it convenient to carry paper and pens when I go out. If I need to take notes, I usually use my phone because it is lighter, faster, and always with me.

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

该回答谈论的是小时候的经历，时间背景是过去，因此动词 like 应使用过去式 liked。建议根据问题中的时间表达，如 when I was very young，统一使用一般过去时。

× I like to fold the paper to make some small craft like a small animals or small books.

✓ I liked to fold paper to make some small crafts, like small animals or small books.

问题询问的是小时候喜欢做什么，因此 like 应改为过去式 liked。建议看到 as a child 等过去时间背景时，使用一般过去时。

× I like to fold the paper to make some small craft like a small animals or small books.

✓ I liked to fold paper to make some small crafts, like small animals or small books.

some 后面通常接可数名词复数，因此 craft 应改为 crafts；并且 small animals 和 small books 都是复数形式。

× I like to fold the paper to make some small craft like a small animals or small books.

✓ I liked to fold paper to make some small crafts, like small animals or small books.

在列举一般类别时，不需要在 small animals 前使用 a，因为 animals 是复数。单数形式应为 a small animal。

× Also I like to draw on paper when I was.

✓ I also liked to draw on paper when I was a child.

因为句子描述的是童年时期的活动，like 应使用过去式 liked。建议过去时间背景下的主要动词保持时态一致。

× Also I like to draw on paper when I was.

✓ I also liked to draw on paper when I was a child.

when I was 后面缺少补足成分，句子意思不完整。应补充 a child，使时间从句结构完整。

× I wrote a physical letter to show my thankless to my high school Chinese teacher in.

✓ I wrote a physical letter to express my thanks to my high school Chinese teacher when I was in high school.

thankless 是形容词，表示“不知感恩的”，不能作“感谢”使用。这里应使用名词 thanks。建议表达感谢时使用 express my thanks 或 show my gratitude。

× I wrote a physical letter to show my thankless to my high school Chinese teacher in.

✓ I wrote a physical letter to express my thanks to my high school Chinese teacher when I was in high school.

句末的 in 后面缺少地点或时间内容，导致介词短语不完整。这里应改为 when I was in high school，表示“当我上高中时”。

× One of my friend likes to keep physical letters around the world.

✓ One of my friends likes to keep physical letters from around the world.

One of 后面必须接可数名词复数，因此 friend 应改为 friends。固定结构是 one of + 复数名词。

× One of my friend likes to keep physical letters around the world.

✓ One of my friends likes to keep physical letters from around the world.

如果想表达“来自世界各地的信件”，应使用 from around the world，而不是 around the world。from 表示来源。

× She often post information on Internet to change different letters with friends network.

✓ She often posts information on the Internet to exchange different letters with friends in her network.

主语 She 是第三人称单数，一般现在时中动词 post 后面要加 -s，改为 posts。建议注意 he、she、it 作主语时的一般现在时动词变化。

× She often post information on Internet to change different letters with friends network.

✓ She often posts information on the Internet to exchange different letters with friends in her network.

Internet 通常与定冠词 the 连用，应说 on the Internet。建议记住常见固定搭配 on the Internet。

× She often post information on Internet to change different letters with friends network.

✓ She often posts information on the Internet to exchange different letters with friends in her network.

表示“在她的朋友网络中”时，应使用 in her network。介词 in 用于表示某个范围或群体内部。

× Not really, because I hold the opinion that it was not very convenient to carry paper and pen.

✓ Not really, because I hold the opinion that it is not very convenient to carry paper and pens.

这里表达的是现在的普遍看法，主句使用现在时 hold，因此从句也应使用现在时 is，而不是过去时 was。

× Not really, because I hold the opinion that it was not very convenient to carry paper and pen.

✓ Not really, because I hold the opinion that it is not very convenient to carry paper and pens.

这里泛指携带多支笔，pen 应使用复数 pens。不可数名词 paper 可以保持单数形式。

× When I'm in outside I need to take notes.

✓ When I'm outside, I need to take notes.

outside 在这里作副词，表示“在外面”，前面不需要介词 in。应直接说 be outside。